Last Monday in March

March is almost over, which means we lost an hour of sleep at the weekend and that spring is finally here (supposedly).

For me it also means I’ve got two weeks holiday!

This week, if the post is agreeable, I am hoping to start a new comparison blog, this time looking at the first Malory Towers book which Stef is kindly sending me. I did scour the charity shops in Perth on Saturday (all dozen or so of them but I couldn’t find a single Blyton book of any kind!)

Stef is planning to have a go at making her own jammy buns, inspired by my impromptu panic-post on Wednesday.

And as billed last week, Poppy’s fanfic will go up this week instead. (Feel free to send my reminders by any method you can come up with on Tuesday night so I don’t forget again!)

And to finish, as aways, some photos! (The Perth ones were taken on Saturday, in not very spring-like conditions, I was wearing gloves!)

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Five Go to Smuggler’s Top: An exciting dramatised adventure

Last year when Stef and I went to Seven Stories I bought a CD of Five Go to Smuggler’s Top and Five Get Into a Fix. Well, I haven’t yet listened to either of them yet (I have a bad habit of buying things and never getting around to watching/reading/listening to them) but I was lacking ideas for a blog this week and Stef suggested the CD, so here we are. It’s a bit of an odd pairing as those are titles 4 and 17 in the series, but they’re two of my favourites so it works well for me.

There are two CDs, each lasting around an hour, though there’s no leaflet or much in the way of information in the case. I’d like to have know the names of the voice actors and details like that.

Five Go to Smuggler's Top and Five Get Into a Fix

Five Go to Smuggler’s Top and Five Get Into a Fix

I have a couple of the Daily Telegraph free audio CDs, so I recognised the music at the start of the story, and the narrator’s voice though like I said I can’t see anywhere on the box who he is. Actually, I had a cassette tape (showing my age here) when I was young of Five Go Off to Camp, and I think that might have had the same music and voice(s). My sister and I still do impressions of Jock’s very Scottish accent (being Scottish ourselves I suppose it’s not so much of an impression really,) when he says “aye, ah’m a ninny!”

Anyway. I’ve got my copy of Smugger’s Top beside me as I’m listening and it’s interesting to see how the text compares. The CD is only an hour long so naturally great chunks are missing, but much of the dialogue and some of the narrative is taken word from word from the book.

The dialogue is acted out by different voice actors, and it’s actually quite good. Though my favourite scene, the ash tree falling is cut down, so I didn’t hear my favourite lines:

“It’s the ash! It’s falling!” yelled Julian, almost startling Dick out of his wits…

“Listen to its terrible groans and creaks!” yelled Julian, almost beside himself with impatience.

which I use as my signature on the Enid Blyton Society forums. Even if Julian had said his lines it wouldn’t have been the same as the narrator only speaks periodically, and the dialogue is generally delivered without any ‘he saids’ or anything.

There are plenty of sound effects though, so they give good clues as to what’s going on – doors opening, Timmy barking, footsteps down the hall. Also a good help is that the voice actors have reasonably distinct voices so you know who’s saying that for the most part.

Sooty’s voice is a little wooden at times, but it’s not too bad. And Block is rather good, he’s wooden as well but then again he’s supposed to be! Julian actually sounds quite like Marco Williamson but I’m fairly certain it’s not him! Incidentally, Mr Lenoir has a distinct French accent, as does Mrs Lenoir, which makes sense given their names though there’s no mention of it in the books.

I enjoyed listening to the dramatisation, it was the right length to listen to in one go without seeming like too much of the story was missing.

Just a little warning, from experience, if you’re listening on a computer just be aware it’s in seventeen chapters, so if you’ve got your player on shuffle you’ll have a very disjointed listening experience!

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The Twins at St Clare’s

Front cover 1967 Dragon editon of The Twins of St Clare's.

Front cover 1967 Dragon edition of The Twins of St Clare’s.

Now as you all know I am  a big Malory Towers  fan,  and I love the series quite dearly, but I have never read a St Clare’s book until now. I brought the 1967 Dragon paperback from the Barnardo’s Charity shop in St Andrews last October (or it may have been July – I forget which) when I was up in Scotland and staying with Fiona.  I already have several Dragon editions of the Malory Towers book, so knew that I was getting a good copy to read. Being aware that St Clare’s predates Malory Towers didn’t stop me being surprised when I noticed several plot points that appear as bigger, more developed stories in the Malory Towers books.

I suppose I should start with the characters first. The O’Sullivan twins are the first obvious characters to look at.  I must admit that I didn’t warm to the twins at all; personally they  didn’t grow on me.  They live up to their nick-name, the stuck-up twins, given to them when they arrive by the rest of their form. After their previous school, Red-Roofs, where the girls father feels they have been given too many airs and graces, St Clare’s is a down to earth school. The twins start the book by telling their parents that they won’t try at St Clare’s because they would rather go to Ringmere School with their friends Mary and Frances White.

Soon after they get to St Clare’s  the twins start getting into trouble; they don’t muck in with the rest of the class and the older girls and get put in their place time and time again. Even the head girl, Winifred James ticks them off for not doing their chores.

The girls then start to muck in a bit, after a word from Miss Theobold, the headmistress, and Winifred, and start to make some friends. However the girls don’t keep to the rules, disobeying another sixth former, Belinda Towers, by going into town when they have been told not to, just as Pat gets selected for the lacrosse team. In the end, she owns up to Belinda and for her honesty is allowed to play in the match.

Other people in the twins’ form include their head of dormitory Hilary, who tries to keep the twins in line, Joan who is the class comic – like Alicia in Malory Towers, Doris who is a bit like Irene and Kathleen who is a bit like Mary-Lou. Kathleen becomes a particular friend to the twins throughout the term, and in the end the three seems like firm friends, Pat even asking Kathleen for her address at the end of the term.

The teachers are interesting as well. Miss Theobold is more involved in the girls’ lives than Miss Grayling is in Malory Towers. The O’Sullivan twins’ form mistress, Miss Roberts, is a nice strong character, Miss Kennedy the history teacher comes in for a lot of tricks from the girls, but when the twins accidentally overhear some of Miss Kennedy’s problems they convince the rest of the forms to behave for her.

One teacher the twins really don’t like much, especially in the beginning, is their French mistress, Mam’zelle who gets nicknamed Mam’zelle Abominable by them because “abominable” is Mam’zelle’s favourite expression when something goes wrong. She forbids the twins to go to the cinema because they have written bad French essays and she wants them to do rewrites and bring them to her before bedtime. Pat gets upset by this and convinces Isabel that they should go to the cinema and then write their essays after bedtime. The twins do this, and when they go to hand their essays in, Mam’zelle is with Miss Theobold. After being told to go to bed by the headmistress, they worry about what will happen to them but Mam’zelle saves the day by offering to spend half an hour each day teaching the twins how to write properly in French. So she’s not all bad.

Back Cover of the 1967 Dragon edition, showing the key of the Dragon books.

Back Cover of the 1967 Dragon edition, showing the key of the Dragon books.

It’s a neat little story and according to the “key” on the back of the book, Blue Dragon is supposed to be “for young children.” So I am not surprised at the lightness of the story. The chapters are short and episodic, almost like they should have been published in Blyton’s magazines.

Overall, I can see the appeal of the books, but I’m afraid I wasn’t too overawed with St Clare’s. Maybe I’m too old for the books, or just too much of a Malory Towers fan to really enjoy the book. As with any of Blyton’s work, it is worth a read!

Next review: Summer Term at St Clare’s

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Feasting on Romantic Comedy – Simply Wizard Jammy Buns from Malory Towers by Helen at Novelicious

I know we promised the next chapter of Poppy’s fic for you today, but I had a Mr Twiddle moment last night and forgot to organise that. I’m blaming an impromptu day off yesterday which left me a bit lost as to where in the week we were. Anyway, I’ve only just realised my mistake and so I thought I’d better get something up quickly and I had this great article bookmarked for a future reblog, so here it is!

Originally posted on Novelicious

Who is for a game of lacrosse with a feast of jammy buns for match tea?

Before I ever enjoyed and salivated over the food described in a Freya North or a Jane Green novel, there was Enid Blyton. Her descriptions of simple and hearty food like a glistening pink ham would have me drooling as I read whilst tucking into a not-so-satisfying luncheon meat sandwich (luncheon meat was a big thing in the 1980s).

In the books, food would be piled high on tables that would also groan under the weight. So. Much. Food…

There’s more foody musings and a super recipe for those jammy buns in the post, taken from the same book Stef’s been using for her making Blyton’s food blogs.

Malory Towers Books

Poppy’s fanfic will appear next Wednesday, as long as Mrs Twiddle keeps me right!

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And We’re Back to Monday

Gosh its been a week already (since my birthday! – thank you all for your kind wishes!) and  the weather here in the UK seems to be getting colder not warmer, what a shame.

It wouldn’t have dared to do this in Blyton’s time!

So this week I may get chance to finish The Twins at St Clare’s and be able to review it for you, as I’m sure you’re all ready for a break from The Missing Papers, so fingers crossed, and you might have something new to read.

Our guest blogger this week, shall be Poppy with the Marsh of Adventure, another thrilling chapter awaits!

Now Fiona’s not sure what she’ll treat us with this week, I think we’ll just have to wait and see I’m afraid; but I know she’ll come up with a goodun.

Oh and don’t forget that if you have a Blyton blog you want to send us to put up, just click on the Want to Write for World of Blyton Page? and scroll down to find our email address!

So this week, I’ve taken lots of photos, but I shall share with you some of the pretty flowers I took when I was last at the garden centre. You could say I got a bit snap happy. Whoops! Anyway, enjoy!

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The Missing Papers: A St Andrews Adventure, chapter 16


Chapter 16

An hour later Julian and David walked out of their science lecture in near complete silence. It had not been a good lecture, Old Dotty was angry and muddled and Anthony had not turned up, leaving the boys worried that he had managed to get away from the university and get the papers somewhere safe after all the effort they had been putting in to find them. However they hit a stroke of luck because as they headed towards the exit, Anthony slipped through the door and headed up to their laboratory.

“So, he hasn’t left the country, at least,” David said, looking over his shoulder.

“No, but he’s had two hours where he could have done anything with those papers,” Julian said, grimly.

David shrugged and looked forward. “I don’t know, but I think we should try and find the girls and see if they have been able to come up with anything,” he said sensibly. “Did we say we would meet them anywhere?”

“No,” Julian said, shaking his head. “Although they’re probably in the cafe, so what do you say to dropping our bags off at our rooms and then heading over to find them?”

David agreed that this sounded like a good idea, and the boys headed off towards their halls. They said very little as they walked, occasionally mentioning the day’s experiment, but both too interested to know where Anthony had been to make much of a conversation of their lecture.

They were surprised to find Darrell and Sally sitting on the wall outside their halls, chatting quietly.

“Hello,” Julian said, walking over to them. “We didn’t expect to find you here.”

“We thought you would be in the nice warm cafe, or the library,” David finished Julian’s sentence.

“I suspect that in a less crazy mixed up world, we would have been waiting for you in the warm cafe,” Darrell said, slipping off of the wall and brushing down her skirt. “However we did decide to come and meet you after our little explorations on the coastal walk.” She smiled up at the boys as she finished speaking.

“Sally has some ideas,” Darrell added before anyone else could speak.

Julian turned his attention to Sally and smiled at her. “You do?”he asked, excitement in his voice. He slung his bag higher on his shoulder and as Sally was preparing to jump off of the wall, he put his hands on her waist and lifted her down with apparent ease. Sally tried to control the blush that came to her cheeks, by telling herself that it was only the cold wind off of the sea. She couldn’t ignore the feeling of Julian’s hands around her waist however and the way in which she ended up standing close to him as he set her on the ground. She rested a hand on his forearm to steady herself, carefully not looking at Darrell or David’s faces.

“Thank you,” she said quietly, before letting go of his arm and stepping back. She smiled a little at him as she continued,

“Yes, a few ideas, although Darrell seems to think I’ve gone quite mad.”

“I never said that you had gone mad,” Darrell protested with a laugh. She slipped her arm through Sally’s and looked at the boys.

“So are you going to let us in to have a chat about things or are we going to freeze to death out here first?”

Julian and David smiled at each other and then at the girls. David led the way into their halls, without a word they climbed the extra stairs up to Julian’s room.

“His room is tidier than mine,” was all David said, as they trudged up to Julian’s dorm room.

They made themselves comfortable, Julian sitting on the floor with his back to the wall under the window, David perched on Julian’s desk while Darrell took the desk chair and Sally perched on the corner of Julian’s bed.

“So Sally,” Julian said, when they were all settled. “Please tell us about these ideas of yours? And what you girls have been doing while we were in lectures!” he added with a smile.

“Where did you go?” David asked, arms folded across his chest. “And what did you deduce?”

Darrell began to talk about their walk down from the golf course, towards the old ruined cathedral, and down towards the east sands, the stretch of beach where holiday makers gravitated to and where fishing boats could get far enough inland to anchor safely. Sally described the idea they had had about the old stone pier being used to signal from as the map they had showed that it was the furthest point out into the sea, but was too low down for any long distance signalling.

“It would be all right for signalling if a boat was closer inland,” Sally said quietly. “But I wouldn’t like to say that if there was signalling that it came from there. It would be an ideal place, apart from the ice-cream hut and a few fisherman’s huts there’s nothing on that side of the coast, nothing overlooks the sands, properly at least except for the cathedral.”

“So that is effectively a dead end then?” David asked, shifting his position against the desk. He too, took up a sitting position on the floor opposite Julian.

“Well no,” Sally said, going bright red. “I do have another idea.”

Sally paused, unsure as whether she should go on, but then Darrell leant over and touched her friend’s arm gently, urging her on.

“Go on, Sally,” Darrell murmured.

“Well, all right. We were walking back up the pier and you can see the towers all the way from the end of the pier, and I suppose you can see them right the way out to sea, and if not at least the other side of the bay, where that holiday camp is. Anyway, I had an idea,” she paused and put her head in her hands for a moment. “Oh dear, this is going to sound terribly foolish I know it is!”

Julian moved to sit next to Sally on his bed. He put an arm around her shoulders and gave them a comforting little squeeze.

Continue reading

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My first Noddy book: Hurrah for Little Noddy

As I’ve possibly mentioned before, to my knowledge I’ve never read a Noddy book before. I’ve always been aware of Noddy, and I could probably sing a good chunk of the TV theme song (despite not being sure whether I’ve ever sat and watched it before) but I’ve never read any of his adventures.

Well, I happened to spot two original titles on eBay and I was fairly confident they were 50s editions and not the modern copies so I snapped them up! They’re a bit tatty, but they do have dustjackets (mostly), so I’m pleased enough.

Most of the dustjacket

Most of the dustjacket

I’m not sure what sort of format this blog is going to take, quite possibly it will just be a rambling stream of thoughts as I read.


HURRAH FOR LITTLE NODDY

First up is Hurrah for Little Noddy, the second title of the 24. (Normally I am a stickler for reading books in order, even if it means having later titles sitting about for years, but I’ll make an exception this time as I doubt not knowing the exact details of Noddy’s move to Toyland will hugely impact my enjoyment.)

The endpapers are the first thing you see when you open the book and these are gorgeous. They are by Harmsen van der Beek, the original illustrator who did the first seven titles before his death in 1953.

I love the image of Toyland, the buildings made out of brightly coloured building blocks. There’s so much to look at – the train and viaduct in the background, the different buildings, all the characters.

The lovely endpapers

The lovely endpapers

The book starts with the milkman’s round and Mrs Tubby tells the milkman that Mr Noddy next door might want some milk. The milkman is a bit surprised about that as there was no house there the day before – but Noddy and Big Ears have apparently constructed one out of toy bricks overnight. Wouldn’t that be a wonderful answer to the first-time-buyer and mortgage issues of today? Just trundle up to an empty bit of land and put together some blocks, sorted!


BEWARE, GOLLIWOGS!

There’s potentially some controversy on page twelve, Mrs Tubby warns Noddy to be careful of ‘one or two of the golliwogs,’ though she doesn’t elaborate. I know the golliwogs have been replaced with goblins for modern reprints, for reasons I’m not about to start debating as I could go on for ages.


Anyway, the story continues with Noddy going out to work. He furnishes his house with cast-offs from four chimneys, a grand doll house, and gets paid for helping the dolls with their spring cleaning. He then goes to work for Mr Golly at the garage, cleaning the cars.

He leaves his hat behind though, and when he goes back to fetch it he witnesses goblins stealing all the cars. Now Noddy has never driven a car before but he takes an old, rickety one and follows them until it falls apart and he ends up in a heap.

We’re reminded he’s a toy here as he says he’s chipped his shoulder and is worried he might have lost a bit off his nose, but Big-Ears who happens to live nearby assures him it’s fine.


BED SHARING!

Next bit of controversy – Noddy and Big-Ears share a bed! Shock horror! I’m sure this has been edited out of later editions. I was discussing this with my aunt and mum last week, and my aunt told me she has hardly ever had a bed to herself. She shared with her younger sister as a child (a single bed side by side for a long while, then in their parents old double after they replaced it,) and a teenager, and then moved straight into a house with her husband after that.

It was pretty commonplace for siblings to share beds, and in other Blyton books we see non-related and non-toy character sharing. Jack and Philip share a mattress in Island of Adventure and Dinah and Lucy-Ann share a bed there, and in Castle of Adventure in the underground room to name but a couple of instances.

As far as I’m aware these have been left alone though!


When Noddy and Big-Ears return to Toyland things go a bit pear shaped as everyone believes Noddy is the thief and he gets thrown in jail! Luckily he’s got Big-Ears to stand up for him, and everything gets all sorted out in the end.

I liked the story, and it was actually nice to read how Noddy got his car as it’s quite an integral part of what people think of when it comes to Noddy. As the song goes, Noddy, the little man in the red and yellow car.

The story isn’t a long one, only sixty pages including a lot of illustrations, but a lot happens and yet it doesn’t seem rushed or contrived at all. I think I would really have enjoyed it as a child, heck, I liked it as an adult and I particularly enjoyed the gorgeous illustrations.

The other book I bought was Noddy Gets Into Trouble so I’ll most likely review that in a fortnight, though I’ve no idea what I’ll do next week yet.

Hurrah for Little Noddy

Hurrah for Little Noddy

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The Rosewood Mystery by Cathy, chapter 5

AN UNEXPECTED SURPRISE

The boatman’s cottage stood right beside the river bank, so part of the boatman’s garden was actually the bank of the river. A small backwater branched off the river just by his cottage, and continued for a few yards until it formed a small pool, where the boathouse stood, its doors wide open.

“How lovely!” said Diana. “Imagine living here – right on the river!”

The boatman was sitting in a deckchair in his garden, smoking a pipe. He was an oldish man of about 65, dressed in grubby trousers and a shirt. He smiled at the children as they walked up to him. Miranda leapt down from Barney’s shoulder and scampered over to the man.

“Well well!” he said. “A monkey! On holiday, are you?”

“In a way,” said Roger. “We’re staying with our friend Miss Pepper, who has just moved into Rosewood Cottage.”

“Ah yes, I know Miss Pepper,” the boatman said. “Came walking down here the other day she did. She did tell me she was having guests, she was asking about my boats. Reckon she thought you might like to hire one.”

“We would,” said Barney, smiling. “The river is lovely. We’d love to go out in a boat on it.”

“Well you’re more than welcome.” said the man. “Not today though, all my boats are out already. This weather people queue up for them, you know.”

The children understood now why the boathouse and pool were empty.

“I’m not surprised.” said Diana. “We’ll have to come along early!”

“Yes, you come along in the morning and I should have a fine boat ready for you,” smiled the man. “And you tell your Miss Pepper that Charlie Collins said hello.”

“Thank you, Mr Collins.” Barney shook hands with the boatman, who seemed a little surprised at such good manners. He sat back down with his pipe, and the children left him alone.

They decided to walk on along the river bank for a little way. It was early in the afternoon, and now that there were no boats to hire, they had nothing to do. Loony decided that he was too hot, and leapt into the water and swam along while the children walked.

“That’s not a bad idea, you know!” said Snubby, watching Loony paddle along. “I might join him!”

And to the children’s amusement, he waded down into the water and swam alongside Loony, while the others carried on strolling.

They walked for about an hour, before they decided to sit down on the bank and dangle their feet in the water to cool down a little bit. There was still a bit of orangeade left over from lunch so Diana shared it out and they sat and drank it, wiggling their toes in the warm water. Loony ran in and out of the shallow water and shook himself all over the children. Usually they hated it when he did that, but today it felt like a lovely cooling shower!

“Oh Loony that was great!” Diana laughed. “Do it again!”

A little while later, Roger happened to look up and saw someone walking along the path towards them, quite a way off. As the person came nearer they saw that it was a man, dressed in shorts and a shirt, carrying a small pack with him.

“This place must be heaven for ramblers,” Barney said.

As the man walked even nearer, Loony suddenly sprang up and ran to meet him. Snubby looked surprised, then suddenly shouted.

“It’s Mr King! Look everyone – it’s Mr King!”

Everyone now recognised the stocky, well-built frame of the approaching man, and as he walked up to them, they saw his short dark hair and friendly, warm smile.

“Hallo hallo!” he grinned at the four children and reached down to pat Loony. “Whatever are you all doing here?”

Mr King was a friend of theirs who they had met a few holidays ago in the village of Rockingdown. He was a very important and high-up member of the police, and had pretended to be a tutor for the children so that he could work undercover in Rockingdown trying to catch a gang of smugglers. They had grown quite close to him towards the end of their adventure, and were very surprised and pleased to see him now.

“We’re on holiday here, with Miss Pepper!” Roger said, as he, Barney and Snubby shook hands with Mr King.

“She has a little cottage in the village,” added Diana, smiling as Mr King patted her shoulder and grinned. “So we’ve come to stay with her for our summer holidays.”

“What are you doing here Sir?” asked Snubby.

“Just taking a walk along this beautiful river.” said Mr King airily. “I’m holidaying too, in the next village. Lower Honeywell.”

“I bet you’re spying on someone!” blurted out Snubby, grinning. “Some kind of hush-hush secret work again! Are you pretending to be a tutor again?”

“That’s enough Snubby,” said Roger sharply. “It’s none of our business what Mr King is doing, and it’s rude to poke our noses in.”

“I wasn’t poking my nose in, I was just being curious!” sad Snubby in a hurt tone.

“Same thing,” laughed Barney. “Sorry, Sir. Are you carrying on this way? We’re going to head back, we’ll walk with you.”

“It’s all right.” Mr King grinned at all the excited faces. “I’m just, erm, on holiday, that’s all. Yes, I’m carrying on this way.”

“Come to tea with us!” said Diana, slipping her arm through Mr King’s as they all strolled on. “Come and see Miss Pepper!”

“Oh, yes, do come back with us!” said Snubby. “Miss Pepper would like to see you again!”

Mr King laughed. “All right then, if you’re sure she won’t mind having an extra guest sprung on her,” he said.

Mr King was a great sport. He very patiently put up with Miranda on his shoulder as they walked. She plucked leaves from any low-hanging branches that they passed, and dropped them down Mr King’s neck. He didn’t even mind when her nimble fingers undid the pack on his back and took out an orange. She started to peel it, and then dropped the bits of peel down his neck too. She was about to do the same with the pips out of the orange, till Barney saw her and the mischievous look on her face.

“And what do you think you’re doing with those?” he laughed, taking the little monkey from Mr King’s shoulder. “I’m sorry, Sir, she’s being mischievous because she likes you.”

“It’s all right.” laughed Mr King, fishing down his neck and retrieving some orange peel and a few leaves.

Miranda chattered loudly and then threw the pips at Snubby. Diana squealed with laughter at the little comic show.

It took them a while to get back to Rosewood Cottage. For one thing they were walking slowly, chattering away, and for another thing both Miranda and Loony were showing off in front of Mr King and vying for his attention. If Miranda sat on his shoulder, Loony would leap up at him as he walked, trying to show that he was important too. If Loony trotted alongside Mr King, Miranda would trot the other side and try to reach up for Mr King’s hand, because she knew that it was something that Loony could not do.

Miss Pepper was astonished to see Mr King with the children when they arrived back. She was out by the gate at the end of the little driveway, pruning back some roses that had grown a little wayward.

“Why, hello!” she smiled, rubbing her soily hands on her apron and going to shake hands with Mr King. “What an unexpected surprise!”

“They insisted on me coming to tea,” Mr King grinned apologetically. “I hope you don’t mind.”

“Of course not,” smiled Miss Pepper. “Come in and we’ll get the tea ready. Diana, would you start it while I put these secateurs away? Have you all had a nice day?”

Miss Pepper was at once met with four different eager conversations describing their day and what they had been doing. She laughed.

“Well from what I can gather you’ve had a nice time! You’re all looking very burnt, I must say! Take Mr King in and show him round. I won’t be a minute.”

The children changed into clean clothes very quickly, and then showed Mr King round the cottage. He thought it was lovely. Diana suggested that they have tea outside on the table on the lawn, and everyone agreed. She and Miss pepper got together a fine tea of crumpets, cake, scones and thick slices of fresh bread that Miss Pepper had baked that afternoon. Diana carried it all out and Miss Pepper followed with the butter, clotted cream and jam. Roger went to fetch the teapot.

“I say, what a spread!” Mr King exclaimed. “I ought to come to tea more often!”

“You’re always welcome,” Miss Pepper said. “Are you holidaying round here?”

Before Mr King had chance to answer, Snubby interrupted.

“He’s doing some secret spying work!”

“Snubby!” Roger kicked him under the table. “Stop saying that! Mr King is on holiday!”

Miss Pepper smiled knowingly. Barney understood what she meant. She knew that Mr King was probably doing some kind of secret work.

They had a most enjoyable tea. Miranda was hilarious, passing Mr King the scones, then some bread, then the crumpets, then picking up the jam pot and butter dish and giving him those too. Then she put the clotted cream down by his arm and pushed the cake over to him as well. Very soon Mr King was surrounded by everything that had been on the table. Miranda jumped up and down on his shoulder, chattering loudly. Everyone shrieked with laughter.

“She’s making sure you don’t go hungry!” laughed Barney.

Loony was the next one to join in. He had been waiting for titbits under the table as usual, but when none seemed to appear, he came out to see what was going on. He scrambled up onto Mr King’s lap all of a sudden and poked his nose onto Mr King’s plate, from which he promptly took a scone, and then disappeared under the table again.

Diana almost fell off her chair with laughter. The animals were so funny when they joined in with everyone else. Miss Pepper looked horrified at these awful manners from Miranda and Loony, but fortunately Mr King had a great sense of humour and didn’t seem to mind at all. Snubby was very pleased to see how much Mr King appeared to like his dog.

They told Mr King all about the adventures they had had since meeting him in Rockingdown. He was amazed.

“Well, you children certainly know how to tumble into adventures!” he said. “I think you’ve had more than I have!”

“I bet you’ll have one now, Sir, if you’re spying on someone!” burst out Snubby.

“Snubby, I won’t tell you again!” Roger sounded exasperated. “Stop going on about it! It’s nothing to do with us what Mr King is doing here!”

“Well I hope we’ll see more of you while you’re around this area,” said Diana, who had grown very fond of Mr King. He seemed strong and brave and exciting.

“I’m sure you will,” Mr King said. “I’ll come and visit again if Miss Pepper will have me, and perhaps we could all go for a walk one day. There are lots of lovely walks round here.”

“I say – we could take a boat down the river!” Roger said. “We were going to do that anyway, but you could come with us, Sir, couldn’t you? ”

“Yes – that would be fun,” Mr King said. “We’ll do that next week.”

Mr King stayed for a little while after tea. They sat in the warm garden and talked, while he smoked a cigarette and relaxed in the comfortable garden chairs. Eventually he got up and stretched.

“Well, I must be off,” he said. “Got to walk back to the next village. It should be nice along the river this evening.”

“Do come and see us soon,” said Diana.

“I’ll come over in a few days and we’ll see about a boat.” smiled Mr King, walking away down the drive. “Cheerio!”

Everyone waved goodbye, then went back into the garden.

“Well – fancy Mr King turning up out of the blue like that!” said Miss Pepper. “What a surprise!”

“I wonder what he’s doing,” wondered Roger. “Of course, he says he’s on holiday, but we all know he must be doing some kind of secret, important work here. He….”

“Ah – so you agree with me!” Snubby said at once. “We know he is! So why did you get so high and mighty with me earlier?”

“Because it’s not polite to keep on saying it in front of him, when he’s told us he’s just on holiday!” said Roger. “It’s obvious he can’t tell us what he’s doing, so why go on about it?”

Snubby looked sulky and wandered off down the garden with Loony. Diana laughed and went to help Miss Pepper clear up the tea things. Roger and Barney were left sitting together.

“I can’t help feeling there’s something very mysterious going on,” said Barney, looking at Roger, his bright blue eyes very serious. “Why would a very important man like Mr King be down here if it wasn’t something dangerous and mysterious?”

“Dangerous and mysterious?” said Roger in surprise. “What on Earth do you mean?”

“I don’t know really,” said Barney. “Just a feeling.”

 

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Birthday Monday

I’ll start with the most important news – it’s Stef’s birthday today! I’m sure you’ll all join me in wishing her a very happy birthday. I did try and get Julian parcelled up to send to her, but he wasn’t very co-operative and so I’ve had to resort to plan B, which I’m still working on. But good things come to those who wait and all that.

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This week on the blog we’ll have fan fiction on Wednesday, and it’s Cathy’s turn again so it will be another chapter of her Barney Mysteries story.

I’m possibly going to read my two new Noddy books and write about those, if I don’t come up with any other bright ideas (which is quite likely.)

Stef might possibly do something about St Clare’s, though she’s whispered she’s not loving the first book so we will have to see. If not, I expect we’ll get more of her St Andrews fan fiction which is starting to get rather exciting.

And I’ll finish off with some pictures I’ve taken over the past few weeks.

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The Missing Papers: A St Andrews Adventure, chapter 15


Chapter 15

As the boys headed down to their lecture, hoping that their plan would work, the girls settled down on their beds once more for a quick chat.

“I suppose we don’t need to do anything major,” Darrell said, after a moment. “But maybe we should do as Julian says and go and walk along the coast to see if there’s a place anyone can signal from?”

Sally agreed and soon the girls were walking briskly towards the coast with their big winter coats and scarves wrapped around them to keep the chill out. The wind was cold and bracing, with none of the warmth that they were used to down in Cornwall at this time of year. Cornwall seemed such a different world up in the Scottish highlands.  They talked about Malory Towers and their beloved coast as they walked to the rugged, less forgiving coast looking out into the North Sea.

“Let’s start from behind the golf club, shall we? That’s a good place to send a signal,” Sally suggested as they walked through the town. “Then we can work our way down the coast, though mind you, I don’t fancy walking on all those slippery rocks in this wind.”

The wind was very strong, buffeting around the girls, making their hair whip around their faces as they walked. Darrell had already had to stop her scarf from flying away.

They reached the golf club and headed around the back of the building, and stopped there for a moment to take in the view. Up this end of the coast, behind the golf club and just after the coast curved inland was beautiful white sand, soft and fine like they girls were used to seeing on a beach. Then further down the coast, the town built on the cliff top, the soft sand gave way to rock, some huge formations rising out of the eroding coastline, others smaller and more worn away by the sea. From where Sally and Darrell stood, they could see the coast curve behind a cliff slightly, but could see down the rocky beach until a large cliff cut off their view.

Sally turned on the spot on the edge of the cliff, her hands kept trying to smooth down her hair in the wind.

“Well I don’t see a likely spot,” Sally said after a moment. She fixed her eyes on Darrell who was staring at the golf club house and hotel in frustration.

“What is it?” Sally asked, almost shouting due to the roar of the waves and the wind. Darrell pointed at the building in front of her.

“We were idiots to start here,” she called back. “No one could signal out here without someone noticing from the golf club! Someone would have been bound to have noticed something like that! Also, unless you’re signalling up the coast then there’s nowhere to signal to, the ground isn’t high enough and the proximity of the club house could easily mean that you get spotted.”

Darrell turned away from Sally to look up and down the coast from the point they were standing. She bit her lip in thought as she considered the geography.  From where they stood she could see that the golf course was far too inland for any signalling. Her eyes followed the line of the coast, she could see that the rocks where they usually ended up, extended out more into the sea. She pointed at them to Sally.

“I think we need to try further down the coast,” Darrell called above the wind. “I don’t think there’s anything up the coast that could work.”

All Sally could do in reply was nod as the wind buffeted around them so violently that they struggled to stand.

They made their way towards the rocky part of the coast. Progress was slow because of the rain.

“I think we’re crackers,” Sally muttered to Darrell as they reached the steps down to the rocks. “Absolutely crackers,” she confirmed as the watched the sea swirl and send up spray.

“Why couldn’t we have just looked at a map?” Sally added as she followed Darrell down on to the damp sand. “At least that way we could have saved ourselves a journey up to the golf course.”

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Five on a Treasure Island – How has Blyton’s original text fared in a modern edition? part 8

So at long last I have finished reading and comparing the two copies of the book! The last two chapters were actually quite light on alterations so it means I have time and words for a summary of sorts. First, the changes though.

All the other parts are here: part one, two, three, four, five, six and seven.


CHAPTER SIXTEEN: A PLAN – AND A NARROW ESCAPE

My more action = more changes theory pretty much crumbles here as there is one measly change in this entire chapter.

Julian originally suggests they should hide over yonder, which becomes just over there in the 1997 edition.

Just imagine Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet given the same treatment.

But, soft! what light through that window over there breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Not quite the same is it? (Not to mention they’d have changed the first words to But oh! or maybe hey there!)


CHAPTER SEVENTEEN: THE END OF A GREAT ADVENTURE

Uncle Quentin’s nice little speech at the end is shorted for the modern edition. And I’m proud of you too George. You’re as good as a boy any day, is what he said first, something that would make George very happy. The last line has been edited out in the paperback, presumably to remove the idea that boys are in any way better than girls.

One last hyphen removal for you: note-book is altered to notebook, though there are countless hyphenated words left such as motor-boat.

A sensible change, possibly, is the addition of be to this line from George – I know I’ve never been lonely, but now I will. I keep reading and re-reading that and thinking it might just about be all right the way it was, but with ‘be’ on the end it’s just a little clearer.

To balance that out, a pointless addition. Oh, thank you, thank you! becomes Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you! Now George is quite grateful there, (I think it’s when her mother says Timmy can sleep in her room,) but two thank yous conveyed that well enough without adding a third I think.

And finally, the end. Or not the end, as those two classic words have been omitted from the paperback.


So, only six changes there. That makes a hundred and seventeen in total (very roughly!)

I marked every queer in the list in my excel file (yes, I made an excel file for this!), and there were thirty two queers over the sixteen chapters, making a neat average of two a chapter. Is that too many? Just out of interest I’ve tallied up their replacements. Strange was used thirteen times, odd six, peculiar five, funny four, weird two, and amazing and uneasy once each. (Sound like spoof mystery solving groups there – the Odd Six? The Funny Four?)

I would say for the most part the changes have, in my opinion, been unnecessary. A few I can approve of and understand, such as the odd correction or clarification, but for the most part I’m left baffled and a bit saddened that apparently modern children can’t understand the original text. Or is it that the publishers and parents just think that?

To be fair though, most of the alterations have been quite minor, very few lines have been cut or drastically changed. I think a good number of them wouldn’t even be noticed if you read it without really thinking about the precise wording.

A final thing, a last comparison if you like. My hardback is almost fifty years old and I have no idea how many times it has been read in that time. My paperback is six years old, and has only been read once. It looks like it’s the other way around though!

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The paperback had honestly been sitting on my shelf untouched since I got it, so it was near enough new condition when I started these blogs. Now look at it! Whereas the hardback looks exactly as it did when I bought it, and not all that different to when it was new. I do have a facsimile dustjacket for it, but I usually take it off when I’m reading as I find dustjackets slip up and down and annoy me too much.

And there you have it. I suppose I should answer the question I’ve set in the title for the blogs. How well has the original text faired in this modern edition? I think I’d have to say “not too badly, considering.” Other books will have come off worse, I’m sure, like Island of Adventure perhaps with Jo-Jo playing such a large role, but on the whole Five on a Treasure Island hasn’t been truly butchered, at least, not in this edition.

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Getting children to read classic books – or not!

Just to make a change from alternating chapters of fan fic, this week I stumbled across this via twitter, one Mum’s struggle to get her kids to read Blyton books. Thought it was quite funny, and got me wondering if my future children would be Blyton fans or not, I know a couple of mums personally who have struggled – mostly because their children stop every two lines to ask what strange words mean. Anyway, here’s the post for you, so enjoy!

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If you wanted to find me as a child, all you had to do was look in the nearest corner and I’d be more than likely sat in it with my nose buried in a book.

I had loads of favourites, from Enid to Blyton, to Roald Dahl, to Judy Blume.

Which is why, when on having kids of my own, I suddenly had an excuse to re-buy all my favourites from my childhood. Not for me, you understand.

For the KIDS.

The Tiger Who Came to Tea, and The Very Hungry Caterpillar were added to the already bulging bookcase, among others.

It’s easy to introduce the classics when the children are small, and to incorporate them into the bedtime routine so that they become firm favourites of theirs as well.

What about when they become older though, and decide to choose their own books? It’s not so easy then.

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March Monday

We’re back to Monday again!

I must say our most popular post last week was Fiona’s captions! They certainly brightened my day! Hopefully she’ll come up with some more soon, but for this week she shall be treating us to her last Five on a Treasure Island comparison.

This week we shall either bring you the next chapter of Cathy’s Rosewood Mystery or if we find a good blog from elsewhere on the web, we shall share it with you.

However, I think I might be depressingly boring and give you another chapter of my Missing Papers Fan fiction. If I come up with any other idea, I shall hopefully be able to present that to you in blog form.

In other news this week, we have been alerted to this wonderful Malory Towers Quiz by one of our lovely Twitter followers. Fiona and I both got Sally Hope. You can find out who you are here. Please do let us know who you turn out to be!

Another interesting link that I found on Twitter this morning, in honour of World Book Day on the 6th March, was a list on the site Buzzfeed called 35 Signs You Read Enid Blyton As A Child (And Quite Possibly As An Adult), in which six of the pictures are sourced from our own blog! You can view the list here!

Back to blog news now, this week we reached 50,000 views!  That’s amazing! Thank you so much to everyone who comes to visit, and keeps on coming back!

And I think that is all for today. I hope you’re looking forward to this weeks selections as much as I am. I shall leave you with some pictures I took on a walk a few weeks ago when the weather brightened. I hope you like them!

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The Missing Papers: A St Andrews Adventure, chapter 14


Chapter 14

Inside the office, Julian had been offered the spare seat and was sitting down in front of the professor as he rambled on. In fact the man hadn’t said anything in the least bit interesting or related to the project that he was working on. All he’d asked Julian was how much he knew from his uncle.

“Well this project,” Doaty said eventually, taking off his spectacles and cleaning them vigorously on his coat. “I suspect your uncle won’t mind me telling you a little, but it’s about creating lots of heat and energy without effecting the environment. The environment is becoming a key issue; though I’m not sure how much it matters should the United States and the USSR decide to blow us all up with their nuclear weapons.”

Julian listened carefully. His uncle had been involved in something similar once before and one of his colleague’s daughter had been under threat of being kidnapped[1].  Doaty rambled on.

“Now you see Kirrin, this experiment is supposed to be top secret. No one was supposed to know we were working on it. But somehow the secret is out and my papers have been stolen. And of course your uncle has had someone try and get into his house. The police informed me this morning that you discovered a page of my equations on the beach yesterday morning,” Doaty said finally seeming to get to the point. “I wanted to thank you and ask you a very misplaced favour.”

“Of course professor,” Julian said, leaning forward slightly, interested in what the old man had to say. He was a rather nice old fool really, Julian reasoned, just a bit of a genius that’s all and if his uncle was anything to go by then it was certainly enough to make anyone a little strange.

“As your reputation seems to be flourishing here, I was wondering if you could do me a very simple favour and just keep an eye out for anything strange,” Doaty said simply. “It would be a great help to know that someone is doing some covert observation.”

Julian raised an eyebrow. He wasn’t sure that he had heard correctly.

“Professor, I’m not entirely sure that that is a good idea,” Julian said slowly. “I mean surely they have police officers for that sort of thing?”

Doaty dismissed this suggestion with a wave of his hand and a ‘phff’ noise.

“Your uncle in fact suggested I asked you this,” Doaty said carefully. “Of course he thinks highly of you. And with all this business going on, along with that those two English men disappearing over the summer, one is entitled to take steps one finds appropriate, Kirrin,” Doaty said raising an eyebrow.  Julian looked carefully at his professor. He felt that he was asking too much of him.

“Sir, I’m not sure I that I am the best person for the job. I’m only an amateur really, whatever my uncle has said to you. I really don’t think I’d do a good job sir,” Julian said honestly. He watched the professor’s face as he told him this.

Professor Doaty eyed Julian up as he spoke, his face looking less than amused. He sighed eventually and nodded.

“I suspect you are right young man,” Professor Doaty said waving Julian away. “Such a shame however, your uncle assured me you were quite gifted in that area!”

“My uncle is not wrong sir, but I think it may be a bad idea for me to dabble in something so big and out of my depth,” Julian said firmly. Sally’s words were still ringing in his head from yesterday as well which was why he was reluctant to agree to his professors words, even though he was very nearly doing what the professor wanted him to do in the first place.

The professor made a non-committal noise at Julian’s words.

“Yes yes, yes,” he said a moment later, waving his hand at Julian as if to tell him to leave. “Mind you do keep an eye out however Kirrin. Against my better judgement, I suggest you inform the police if you see or hear anything suspicious,” Doaty said now a little more like his old self. He began muttering to himself.

“I wonder who really is looking after this project. No one seems to care any more,” Doaty glanced up at Julian and realised that he hadn’t dismissed the lad.

“All right boy, off you go,” Doaty waved Julian out of the room with the flap of his hand rather like Quentin Kirrin did when he wanted people out of the way.

Julian got out of his seat and headed out of the door to the tune of Doaty muttering to himself;

“Well the minster concerned certainly doesn’t seem to care; I mean who’ll look after Sahara. I swear all this has just proved that until you have a breakthrough you’re chicken feed…”

Julian closed the door thankfully and leant on it for a second. He looked up and down the corridor and spotted no one around. That meant that either David hadn’t made it up here for whatever reason or had already headed back down to the library. He sighed a little, and pushed away from the door. He swung himself down the corridor and headed down the stairs on his way down to the library.

David waited a few heartbeats before trying to follow Julian out of the building and back to the library like they had agreed earlier. With the girls in the corridor below, keeping an eye on the stair cases, they would run straight into Julian about now. David was just about to follow when he heard the door at the other end of the corridor open and quick footsteps head towards Doaty’s door.

David only just had time to dive back behind the curtain as the person drew nearer. David took a chance to peek through the gap between the curtain and the wall to see the back of the person opposite Doaty’s door.

There was a sharp knock from the person and then the face looked over both shoulders as if expecting to see people crowding around the door.  Continue reading

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The Famous Five TV Series: Even More (Funny) Captions

The captions I put on a fortnight ago seemed to go down well so I thought I would put some more on this week (as I couldn’t think of anything else to do!)

Firstly, carrying on from last week’s leaning theme, a caption featuring the one moment in the 90s series that never fails to make Stef and I cringe. I watch it from between my fingers if I can even look at all. (It’s in Five Go to Billycock Hill part one, in case you need advanced warning – ta Stef for reminding me which ep it was.)

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I know Dick is braver than this, but hey, it’s captioning, doesn’t have to be true to life.

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All the captions I’ve put up so far have been old ones, some slightly edited, but this one I did tonight especially for this blog. Aren’t you just so honoured?

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The clothes give us endless joy, particularly Dick’s range of patterned pull-overs. Stef and I even have a ‘favourite’, a very dubious honour. It’s this one:

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Not sure why, but this one’s our favourite. Or at least it’s mine! Stunning.

And talking of Famous Five fashion, a treat for the 70s series fans, (eagle eyed readers may have noticed I dropped the ’90s’ from the blog title, this is why!) Julian’s lovely jacket. (Dick has one too, I prefer the black to the brown actually, but Julian wears his more.) I don’t know why I like this jacket so much as I’m no fan of the updated 70s fashions in the series, but I do. Seeing it makes me happy.

jacketjuSo, hope you liked these captions too (though I know I’ve drifted from true captions in a couple of place. And used far too many brackets probably. Sorry.) And maybe some day there will be more, as I have a host of screen shots just waiting to be made even funnier.

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The Marsh of Adventure By Poppy, chapter 14

Chapter fourteen:

Back at Lowfell Inn

The children awoke early that next morning, all lying outside their tents in their clothes! The children themselves were indeed very surprised but then remembered and grinned. “We must have fallen asleep just after dinner and not woken back up! My goodness we are up early!” Lucy-Ann exclaimed. “It’s only half five, but we’ve had plenty of sleep so don’t let’s go back to sleep.” The children got changed into clean clothes and had some breakfast. They then took all the pots down to the stream and washed them and then found the deeper spot and began splashing about again. There was nothing like an early morning swim.

“What time shall we set off to the inn?” called Jack, as they splashed about, Kiki keeping a distance away again.

“About half six I should think. We’ll have plenty of time before lunch, we can go and get your batteries and then perhaps we can join lunch at the inn, today?” Philip replied.

So at half past six the children set off down the other side of Lowfell Hill, carrying two large baskets to put the food in. The stream turned rather suddenly not far down and made off down the hill in a different direction. The children could just see the back of Lowfell Inn from where they were walking. The sun blazed down onto the children’s heads, and Kiki began to feel uncomfortable. She turned round to face the other way on Jack’s shoulder, and found it was just as hot. She turned round again and began pecking Jack’s ear, trying to get his attention. She listened to the children and suddenly Lucy-Ann shouted Jack and pointed to a bird up in the sky. It was only a blue-tit but she didn’t really know much about birds and couldn’t tell the difference between a common one and a rare one. She knew the names of a few, but only the rare ones that Jack talked about for hours on end.

Jack laughed as he looked up at the blue-tit. They all laughed at the little bird. Kiki listened to all this, desperate for some water. How could she get Jack’s attention? He usually ignored her silly remarks.

“JACK!” she screeched, imitating Lucy-Ann, “JACK!” Jack looked at her at once. Kiki had learnt all sorts of phrases and strange words but she had never tried to make a conversation before! Kiki had heard the children say ‘water’ many times before and she had picked it up, usually eyeing the water in dislike, but now she could really do with a bit to cool her down. “Water!” she screeched much to the children’s amazement. Jack laughed at her and produced a bottle of water he took from the basket, Dinah was carrying. Kiki stuck her beak down it and lapped up the water, thirstily. Ah that was better! The children carried on, and very soon, they reached Lowfell Inn, the place they had all started their holiday.

The children went in the back door, through the kitchen and past the cook, who was busily making some delicious looking cakes for lunch. They went on into the sitting room, where a few guests were sat, knitting or reading. No Mrs Jordans. They wanted to ask her if there had been any news about Bill, before they asked Jane the cook to get them some more food. They soon found her cleaning the tables in the dining room, preparing them for lunch.

“Hallo children!” she cried in delight when she saw them. “Now, you’re just in time for a delicious lunch, would you stay for lunch?” she asked in her sing-song voice, wiping her big hands on her apron.

“Yes, of course, Mrs Jordans, we’ll stay, but have you any news on Bill?” Lucy-Ann asked, hoping dearly that she had.

“Now don’t you worry yourself about Mr Bill, no more, missus. E’s safe, see? You just enjoy yourself, young Lucy-Ann.” she said, tickling Lucy-Ann under the chin. “You take my word for it, eh,” she said.

Lucy-Ann beamed. She felt sure Mrs Jordans was right.

“We’re just going to pop out to get some batteries for Jack’s torch, Mrs Jordans. We’ll be back soon for lunch. Oh, and could you ask Jane to pack us up some more food, please? Plenty, for it does seem the warmer the weather is, the hungrier we get,” Philip said politely.

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First Monday in March

I can hardly believe it’s March already! We’re nearly at 50,000 views on the blog so hopefully by next week’s post we’ll be celebrating that.

To earn those views we’ll be putting up another chapter of Poppy’s Adventure Series fanfic on Wednesday, and most likely the next chapter of Stef’s St Andrews Mystery on Sunday. I hope so as despite having read it already, and having the whole thing on my laptop I’m reading it a chapter at a time as I tidy it up for publishing and it’s hotting up nicely at the moment. I resisted the urge to read ahead today after chapter thirteen went up.

From me? I’m not really sure yet. I have a long list of ideas but nothing is really jumping out at me saying “write me, write me!” Might be a little bit worrying if it did though, so maybe that’s just as well. I will most likely decide on Thursday night at about ten o’clock after putting it off/forgetting about it all evening.

I’ll sign off now with some pictures (mostly of birds – I’ve gone all Jack Trentish again.)

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The Missing Papers: A St Andrews Adventure, chapter 13


Chapter 13

Sally awoke the next morning, having had a restless night. Her harshness towards Julian had plagued her thoughts the previous evening and had troubled her in her sleep causing her to wake every few hours. She didn’t like the person she had become yesterday and made up her mind that even though she believed that she had been right in telling Julian that he should give up on this mystery as it was too far out of his reach, she felt that she could have maybe handled things better. Darrell hadn’t said as much yesterday but Sally knew her friend would think it best that she apologised.

Sally didn’t like the idea of making a special trip to St Salvator’s just to apologise to Julian as she thought that it touched a little too heavily on the feelings she was beginning to have for him, and would make things all too obvious. However the idea of waiting was torturous.

She took a deep breath and reached across the room to poke Darrell on the shoulder as she slept in her bed not three feet away.

“Darrell!” Sally called gently. “Darrell wake up! Oh do wake up! I need to talk to you about something rather important!”

Darrell rolled on to her back, groaning in protest against being woken up so early. She yawned and when she finally opened her eyes, the first thing she did was reach for her alarm clock.

“Sally its half past five in the morning! Whatever is so urgent? Why aren’t you asleep?” she yawned propping herself up in bed on her elbows and peering bleary eyed at her best friend.

“I’m very tempted to say that if the building is not on fire then I’m going back to bed,” she added sulkily. She hadn’t spent the night worried about how her words yesterday had affected anybody and had been quite blissfully asleep until her friend had poked her, but Darrell guessing that Sally wouldn’t have woken her without good reason and did her best to be awake and listen to her.

As Sally poured out her conundrum, Darrell began to wish that Sally could have held on a little long before asking her these questions.

“So what do you think I should do?” Sally asked Darrell, feeling bad for waking her, but at the same time desperate for an answer. “Should I go over before breakfast or wait until we see him later today?”

Darrell yawned again, burrowing under her blankets so her head was the only part of her that could be seen.

“Before breakfast might not be a good idea,” Darrell conceded after a moment’s thought. “Maybe you should try and catch him and David as they go to their morning lecture. You don’t start until ten today, so you’ll have plenty of time to meet them at their lab and then go on to your lecture,” she said carefully, hoping that this would be a sensible idea. It was usually Sally who had sensible ideas not her; Darrell was usually the one who needed a sensible word and help to solve a problem, not Sally. Darrell wasn’t all too sure that she liked this new role reversal.

Sally nodded with understanding.

“I think you’re right,” she said with a small smile. “That would be the best way. I just hope that I can find him… them before their first lecture.”

“I’m sure that won’t be a problem, but now, if you don’t mind, there is still a good two hours before we actually need to be up, and I would like to get a bit more sleep. Do try not to fuss until then and get a rest, there’s a good sport,” Darrell said turning over on her side again, her face away from Sally.

“Yes, alright, I shall try,” Sally said, turning over with a slightly easier mind now and pulled her blankets up over her shoulders.

With her back to Sally and her covers pulled almost over her head, Darrell grinned to herself. Sally had slipped up a little bit. Julian seemed to be playing on her mind more than she would care to admit. Darrell had to stop herself from chuckling, it was slightly amusing to see Julian and Sally dance around each other even if it was something that would quickly become tedious. Darrell was still amused as she dosed off again until the alarm woke her two hours later.

Sally was rather quiet and serious as they got ready for breakfast and got their books together for their first lecture, she was thinking about what she would say to Julian if she could catch him before his lecture. Darrell kept sending her little encouraging smiles as they got ready to go down to breakfast.

The girls went down rather quietly, Sally clearly being slightly nervous at her task ahead. Darrell chattered a little about the weather and the work they had left to do. Sally responded as naturally as she could but her mind wasn’t really paying attention to what Darrell was saying as much as she would have liked. Darrell relented over breakfast and dug out one the novels she had to read for English literature, while Sally tried not to worry herself silly over Julian’s reaction. She still wasn’t sure what she was going to say to him exactly.

As soon as she had finished her breakfast Sally began to make a move, but stopped half way through her preparations to leave. Darrell looked up at her inquiringly.

“What’s up?” she asked marking her place in her book with her finger. “You look scared. Julian’s not going to bite your head off,” she grinned.

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Five on a Treasure Island – How has Blyton’s original text fared in a modern edition? part 7

The book is getting to some of its most exiting scenes now, so I wonder what effect that will have had on the editor’s pen? [I’ll admit to one of my grammar problems now, I really struggle with affect and effect. Someone, please correct me if I’ve got it wrong just now!]

A reminder of earlier posts: part one, two, three, four, five and six.


CHAPTER THIRTEEN: DOWN IN THE DUNGEONS

Well, a disappointing moment for my theory. Hardly anything got edited in this chapter. Maybe the editor got swept up in the story.

What was changed was the usual stuff, queer becoming weird and then strange, whilst being altered to while twice, and a bit of de-hyphening if that’s a real word. The modern edition has is a little more consistent here, Blyton uses key-hole twice and keyhole once, whereas this is altered to read keyhole in all three instances for the paperback.

On the plus side, I was able to enjoy more of this chapter instead of constantly putting the book down to make notes! Anyway, onwards.


CHAPTER FOURTEEN: PRISONERS!

Well, we seem back on form already. By the second line of the chapter we’ve got a silly change. In the original, George is dumbly staring at the ingots, and holding one in her hand. This has been changed to in her hands. The previous chapter tells us they walked in, flashing their torches, so I wonder if George has a third hand secretly, so she’s got two on the ingot and one on her torch. I can’t think why this has been changed, unless they think George (who’s just been smashing a heavy door with an axe) is too weak to hold an ingot with one hand.

Next, capitalised words are made lower-case. Julian is yelling down the passage; WE’VE FOUND THEM! HURRY! HURRY! the capitals adding volume and drama. In lower-case, it lacks the same punch. I’m not advocating using capitals every time someone raises their voice, but sparingly they do add to the story.

Another baffling alteration, George originally tells the men that The island and the castle belong to my mother. It gets changed to This island… I’m sure both are perfectly correct but I’m not sure why they went to the effort of changing it.

There were two queers in this chapter, but of course they are now strange and odd. And finally, worth while is altered to worthwhile which is a more common way of saying it these days.

So still not many changes for quite an action-packed chapter.


We were at 95 changes by my rough count, now it’s 107 as there were only 12 changes between these two chapters. I think that’s the least yet, and as someone who loves to come up with theories, may I suggest the editor got bored and/or tired by this stage?

In fact, this post is so short I’m going to treat you to a third chapter. (Also, there’s an odd number in the book so it’s this or a whole post on a single chapter later!)

CHAPTER FIFTEEN: DICK TO THE RESCUE!

Another barely-touched chapter here. We’ve got two whilsts to whiles, which is consistent anyway.

Also, Dick thinks it’s lucky that he’s good at gym, in the original this has a full stop after it to signify it’s short for something, and that’s been removed in the paperback, presumably as gym has been adopted into normal usage. It actually made me stop and wonder exactly what it was short for. Gymnasium, the room you would do gym in doesn’t make sense in the context, so I’m left thinking gymnastics. He’s talking about climbing ropes so that makes sense, though at school when we said gym we meant any sort of physical lesson – what was known as PE (physical education) at high school, or games if you went to a posher school, and it covered everything from swimming and running to tennis, hockey, volleyball, badminton, basketball and so on.

And last but not least, something that’s happened a few times, hie becomes hi. This time Dick is speaking, calling for Julian and George, Hie, Julian! Hie, George! who are locked in the room with the ingots. He’s not saying hello, and if he was he wouldn’t say hi, he would say hallo most likely.


Another four changes takes us to 111 then, and a good place to stop. Only two more chapters to go, so that’ll go on in about two weeks, and then… well, I’m tempted to do another book, but looking at the 2010 (I think) editions where they become Mum and Dad. But I don’t know, I might have a fit of apoplexy and never write again if I did that.

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The Rosewood Mystery by Cathy, chapter 4

SETTLING IN!

The rest of the afternoon was spent exploring the little cottage. There was a kitchen and larder at the back, which looked out over part of the garden, and a pretty sitting room which had lovely big wooden-framed glass doors that opened out onto the other part of the garden. Miss Pepper told the children that she would always have the doors open in the hot weather, which they loved the idea of as they could wander in and out as they pleased, and feel the nice breeze coming in when they were sat in the sitting room.

At the other end of the sitting room was a lovely big window seat covered with soft cushions, and Loony claimed this at once, looking most cosy snuggled up there. Miranda wanted to sit there too but Loony was right in the middle, so the little monkey picked up a cushion and started to hit Loony with it, to try and get him to move up.

On the other side of the hall there was a small dining room with table and chairs.

The rooms upstairs were just as quaint. All the bedroom ceilings sloped in one direction or the other, and were full of dark old beams. As the pretty garden surrounded most of the cottage, everyone’s rooms looked out onto the bright green lawn. Diana’s room was closest to Miss Pepper’s, Barney’s was next to Diana’s, and Roger and Snubby’s was farthest away on the other side of the cottage. Miss Pepper had put them there in the hope that she would get a bit of peace from Loony.

Diana also discovered that her bedroom window gave her a view of the manor up on the hill. It looked a most exciting place.

The little bathroom was done out in pale blue and white, with matching towels. Everyone was thrilled with the cottage, and Miss Pepper felt pleased and proud that they all loved her little second home. She meant to spend a lot of time there. The village was prettier than the one where she currently lived.

After supper that evening, Barney kindly noticed that Miss Pepper looked very tired, so he politely suggested that they should all go to bed. He nudged Roger and Roger understood at once, feeling sorry for Miss Pepper who had done a lot of driving that day and had made them a fine supper with Diana’s help. Miss Pepper usually liked to go to bed early anyway, so the children said goodnight and went up to their pretty little rooms. Miss Pepper read a bit more of her book and then went up to bed too.

Diana was asleep almost as soon as her head hit the pillow. Her little bed was very comfortable and she had her bedroom window open so she could hear the owls hooting in the trees. As it happened she didn’t hear any at all – she was asleep too quickly!

Barney kept awake while Miranda explored their room, then when she grew accustomed to where everything was, she leapt onto Barney and snuggled down against him, putting her arms round his neck.

Roger and Snubby took longer to go to sleep, mostly because Loony was racing about the room, wide awake.

“Oh, Loony, settle down!” protested Snubby, who was actually quite sleepy. Loony leapt onto the bed, and Snubby thought he was about to settle, but then he took a flying leap over onto Roger’s bed and gave a delighted bark. Then he shot off round the room yapping excitedly, before leaping onto both beds again and then proceeding to lick Snubby’s face.

“Oh get off, dog!” Snubby pushed him away from his face. “I’ve already had a wash thanks, I don’t need another one!”

Roger gave a loud roar of laughter.

“Snubby! You’ve got another dirty mark on your chin! Loony is trying to wash it off!”

“How can I have a dirty mark?” protested Snubby. “I’ve just washed!”

“No idea,” said Roger, snuggling down. “It beats me how you always seem to get filthy all the time.”

“Well I’m not getting up again,” Snubby said decidedly, arranging his pillow and giving Loony a pat as he settled in the crook of his knees. “Dirty mark or not.”

Roger didn’t answer. He was asleep! Snubby lay awake for about fifteen minutes, then he fell asleep too. The household was quiet save for the owls in the garden. But Diana missed them all!

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