Bank Holiday Monday

Here we are on a (hopefully) sunny bank holiday Monday. It is so glorious to see the sun again, I just wish I lived near the sea or the beach so I could indulge in those Blytonesque past times of swimming, rowing and ice creams (though it is still far too chilly to swim in the sea).

Anyway, we’re a bit of a cop out this week I think, Fiona doesn’t know what she’s favouring us with (she’s not feeling too well at the moment, bless her, so I think we can forgive her for not knowing what she’ll write about.)

I think we’re on the next chapter of Cathy’s Rosewood Mystery this Wednesday, that will be smashing!

I might get around to reading one of my  new books, The Queen Elizabeth Family, which means if I do, I shall review it for you, if not, it will be another chapter of The Missing Papers!

Just to finish, I have a couple of memes I want to share with  you. I hope you like them!

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The Missing Papers: A St Andrews Adventure, chapter 19


Chapter 19

Darrell was waiting for the boys when they finally made it out of the changing rooms. She saw David grinning ruefully at Julian as he was teased about his rugby skills once more.

“Well I don’t see you doing any better, grand detective or not,” David retorted over his shoulder before almost bumping into Darrell.

“Oh hallo Darrell! What brings you here?” David asked, putting out a hand to steady them both.

Darrell looked worried as she spoke to the boys in a quiet voice.

“Have either of you seen Sally this evening?”

“Not for a while, since I dropped her off outside your halls about four hours ago,” Julian said, frowning as David shook his head. “Why? What is the matter?”

“I can’t seem to find her, and I’ve not seen her since she went out for a walk this afternoon,” Darrell said, rubbing her nose; something she always did when she was worried or puzzled.

“She has to be somewhere,” David said, flicking his hair out of his eyes. “Have you checked the library?”

“That was the first place I checked,” Darrell scowled at David.  She didn’t like the feeling that the boys were not taking her seriously.

“What about the café?” Julian asked frowning. He was now wondering whether he had actually seen Sally heading into her halls when he had left her earlier. She had been standing on the step, he knew that, but had she gone in? It was beginning to look like she hadn’t.

“No,” Darrell admitted. “I didn’t try there. I didn’t think she would have gone there on her own.”

“Well why don’t we go and check while David goes and drops his kit off in halls?” Julian suggested, winking at David.

Darrell shrugged and nodded.

“I’ll meet you at the café in twenty minutes,” David said. He placed a hand on Darrell’s shoulder and gave it a squeeze.

“Don’t fret so! I suspect that Sally simply bumped into a friend and got talking, she won’t have gone far.”

Darrell tried to smile, but couldn’t shake off the feeling of unease was plaguing her. She was worried about Sally. Something about this wasn’t right.  As she and Julian set off towards their favourite café, she asked him quietly whether he thought she was overreacting.

Julian wasn’t sure how to respond.

“I don’t know Darrell,” Julian said honestly, as they headed to Market Street towards the café. “I was sure that I left her at the entrance to your halls before I headed back to St Salvator’s.”

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First Term at Malory Towers – How has Blyton’s original text fared in a modern edition? part 3

I’m now onto chapters six and seven of the book, and have reached the bit I was most looking forward to – Darrell versus Gwendoline in the pool. I imagined that would have been heavily updated and I was right. How right? You’ll have to read on and see!

You can see my comments on the first two chapters here, and chapters three to five here.


CHAPTER SIX: ALICIA’S LITTLE JOKE

There is only one real alteration in this chapter, when Alicia deliberately mishears Mam’zelle Dupont asking her if she has a cold. She pretends she thought she said gold and replies no, only a ten-shilling note. This has been updated to a five pound note again, as in chapter one as this is the amount given to the girls as pocket money for the term.

Removal of full stops for abbreviations and de-capitalising break remain consistent though.


CHAPTER SEVEN : DARRELL LOSES HER TEMPER

Now here we go! Lots to discuss here.

Firstly, a simple change. How queer becomes how odd.

The rest of the changes revolve around the word slap, which apparently is too heinous a word for children to read and it must be replaced with less on non-violent words.

Gwendoline no longer thinks she would like to slap them both, or that it would be decidedly dangerous to slap Alicia. Instead she thinks about how she would like to scold them both, and how it would be decidedly dangerous to scold Alicia.

I don’t really approve of changing slap to scold, especially as these are only thoughts and not actions, but they make sense at least. It’s rather spoiled by the line in between those thoughts, though, which is Miss Winter had always said that a little lady kept her hands to herself. That really makes no sense in the modern edition, in between to references to scolding someone which involves no hands at all.

The sharp slap Gwendoline receives from Darrell for ducking Mary-Lou becomes a sharp shove. I’m not sure a shove can be sharp, really. A simple shove might have worked better, though to me a shove is still violent so I’m not sure why shoving is more acceptable than slapping. 

The next edits are some of the biggest I’ve seen, whole sentences rewritten or removed altogether so bear with me as I try to outline it all.

Right after the first confrontation between Darrell and Gwendoline, Gwendoline tries to leave the pool and Darrell catches up with her. Then, originally, it reads there came the sound of four stinging slaps and Gwendoline squealed with pain. It has become there came the sound of Gwendoline’s squeals as Darrell shook her roughly. 

Again, shaking is violent. Why it that allowed if slapping isn’t? The change leads to a lot more changes too. 

Whole lines are lost. Originally, immediately after the above quotes, we have Darrell’s hand was strong and hard, and she had slapped with all her might, anywhere she could reach as Gwendoline hastily tried to drag herself out of the water. The slaps sounded like pistol-shots.

This is cut to simply Gwendoline hastily tried to drag herself out of the water. It could have been made into something along the lines of Darrell’s arms being strong and she shook her so hard her teeth rattled but maybe that’s too violent – there seems to be a line in the sand somewhere below slapping.

So, all other references to slapping are lost (I shan’t list the ones which are straight forward exhanges from slap to shake but there are two if you are interested). Katharine tells Darrell she has put herself in the wrong, slapping about like that (which is a bit of an odd phrase anyway!) or in the paperback for behaving like that.

Then, more big cuts. In the changing rooms after, Darrell sees Gwendoline, dolefully examining the brilliant red streaks down her thighs. That was where Darrell had slapped her. This is edited to it was Gwendoline, dolefully trying to console herself after Darrell’s rough treatment. I’m not sure just how you dolefully console yourself. Sometimes I think they try too hard to leave in the original wording especially where it no longer makes sense.

And one last decent sized change, I shall write and tell mother, she thought. If only she could see those red streaks – why, you can see all Darrell’s fingers in this one! becomes I shall write and tell mother, she thought. How horrible Darrell is! 

Almost tame in comparison is the final edit where Darrell’s towel-cloak becomes a plain old towel. I don’t know exactly what a towel-cloak is. Presumably a cloak make of towelling material for wrapping around your shoulders when you’ve come out of the pool?

article-2022032-0D474DF500000578-290_306x590This is from the late 1920s (borrowed from the Daily Mail online), so I’m thinking that’s the sort of thing they mean, a towel that ties around the neck. I’m getting off topic now though!


I had intended to do three chapters again this week but there was so much to write about chapter 7 I’m going to stop there for the moment. Neither chapter was illustrated so there’s nothing to say about those either. 

I make that 11 changes then, between the two chapters. Not all that many, but most of them were quite substantial really. That brings us to 42 in total.

 

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A Missing Scene: Dick’s Adventure from Five Get Into Trouble

Dick felt angry and a bit afraid as the two men took no notice of his protests, but just dragged him away from the clearing where he had been mending the puncture in his tyre.

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He thought of poor Anne up the tree and felt glad she was safe there and could tell the others what had happened. He hoped she wouldn’t have to wait too long for Julian and George to return. He was glad when the men stopped and he found to his surprise that a large car was blocking the path.

Roughly one of the men dragged open a rear door and Dick was pushed in. The man jumped in beside him and the other was soon in the driver’s seat and revving the engine angrily. Slowly the car reversed down the path until it reached a place where it was wide enough to turn. Dick was glad the men had not tied his hands or legs together as he was able to steady himself as the car lurched round corners and roared along the roads where it could get up some speed.

“Where are we going?” he asked. “You’re going to be in trouble for kidnapping me like this. For the last time I tell you I am NOT Richard – well not the Richard you are looking for.”

“Rooky saw you so don’t tell lies,” the driver said. “Just you wait until he gets his hands on you. You’ll be sorry!”

“He will know you have made a mistake when he sees me,” said Dick bravely, although he was feeling quite worried about what was going to happen to him.

“Shut up, you talk too much,” said the man who was sitting beside him ready to grab him if Dick made any unwise move.

The car purred on through the night. It was very dark although Dick knew there should be a moon later on. It wasn’t really very long before the car ran alongside a high wall and then drew up at some large iron gates. The driver hooted the horn three times and after a moment the gates began to open. The car moved forward and Dick craned his neck to see who had opened the gates. He could see nobody and as he watched out of the back window he saw the gates swing shut again. He felt a shiver run down his spine. It seemed so eerie, as if some invisible hands had been in control.

“Don’t be so silly,” he said to himself after a moment. “There must be some remote control working them.” The car drew up at a door and the driver jumped out and opening the rear door he tried to pull Dick out. “I can manage on my own,” Dick said, indignantly, and he walked towards the now open front door between his two captors.

In the hall stood a tall man smoking a cigarette. “So what’s all this about? Where’s Rooky?”

“Rooky caught sight of this boy, and he insisted we give chase,” replied one of the men. “We caught him, but got separated from Rooky. We didn’t wait around for him. He’ll make his way back as soon as he can. He can’t wait to get his hands on this rat.”

“There is other business to see to tonight,” said the man in an annoyed tone. “I’ll take care of this boy. Now off you go… Hunchy!” he called “Come here.” A short rather ugly man appeared from a nearby room. “Take this boy to the attic room at the far end of the corridor,” he said to him. “I must see to the gates.”

“Get a move on,” said Hunchy. “Mr Perton’s orders must be obeyed.”

Dick decided he had better co-operate. He was still confident he would be released when the mistake was discovered. He followed Hunchy up two flights of stairs and was shown into a bare room at the top of the house.

A chair and a mattress were all that was there. As Dick walked in, the door banged behind him and he was alone. He heard the key turn in the lock. He sat down on the chair and put his head in his hands. For a little while he sat there wondering what was going to happen next. It was quite dark now and he wondered if he would be able to see anything out of the window. He went across the room and tried to see through the rather grubby pane of glass. As his eyes grew accustomed to the faint light from a pale moon he could just make out a garden area but nothing more. He sighed. I wonder what the others will do when Anne tells them what happened, he thought. I wish I could let them know where I am.

Just then he heard a noise at the door. The key was turned and Hunchy came in carrying a blanket and an oil lamp. He was followed by a woman carrying a tray. She put it down on the chair and scuttled out without saying a word. “Thanks,” said Dick. Hunchy looked surprised but he also went out without saying anything, having dumped the blanket on the mattress and the oil lamp on the floor.

Dick looked at the tray. A cup of tea – well that was very welcome as it felt a bit chilly in this unused room at the top of the large house. He picked up the plate and looked at what was on it. Two large rounds of bread and cheese lay there. It didn’t look particularly appetising but by now Dick was very hungry so he tucked in and was surprised at how tasty the bread and cheese turned out to be. He drank the tea and put the tray down beside the lamp. He decided to lie down and see if he could sleep.

He had just put the blanket down on the mattress and was wondering whether to take his shoes off when the door opened yet again. This time Mr Perton came in. Before Dick could start trying to explain once more about the mistake there was a sharp noise at the window. Mr Perton looked round and frowned. He stood listening then there was another bang at the window. Mr Perton walked quickly across and looked out, then, giving a sharp exclamation he hurried from the room, locking it quickly behind himself before rushing down the stairs. Dick hurried to the window but he could see nothing. With a sigh he decided he had better try to get some sleep, so he lay down on the mattress and pulling the blanket over himself he curled up and tried to go to sleep.

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Last Monday in April

So I did more book buying this week, oops. Here’s what I got:

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From left to right: The Shuddering Mountain Game (unfortunately without the cards and die but I have another of the series, found in the very same charity shop no less, so I had to buy it), An Exciting Term (my second Angela Brazil, though I’ve not read the other yet), The Song of the Abbey (#37  of 38 in the Elsie J. Oxenham series) and The Red Flower Mystery by Juliat Marais Louw (another Collins Seagull Library title).

They were £3 or under each so I think I did not too badly. That charity shop (Barnardo’s Books) had a good selection of Blytons actually (and a half-decent forgery of her signature) and I snapped a few photos with my phone.

And then Waterstone’s had three of their little recommendation tags for Blyton’s books. Not sure I agree with the one about Malory Towers though!

I really should read/play the Famous Five games I have and review them for the blog!

This week though I’ll be carrying on with my Malory Towers text changes, but maybe the next week if I can find time.

We’ve got a new contributor this week, who has written a short Famous Five piece, a sort of “missing chapter” to one of the books. And there will be more fan fic from Stef too, as she’ll be putting up the next chapter of her St Andrews story.

And so now it’s picture time.

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Boody The Great Goblin and Other Stories

The First Edition Dust Jacket of Boody the Great Goblin and Other Stories.

The first edition dust jacket of Boody the Great Goblin and Other Stories.

This is a book that I had very little idea about until I came across it in a lovely little bookshop in a recent trip to Alton. It was an intriguing find, and I had to have it.

My copy has a pleasant, bright dust jacket, with one elephant telling the stories to two younger elephants. Its bright and friendly cover of this slim volume makes for magical reading. The stories are aimed at younger children; they are short  fairy tale stories. The book is only 80 pages long and makes a good afternoon’s easy reading.

Boody the Great Goblin is the first and longest story in the book and is about a goblin who is trying to make his fortune. He starts out by trying to create the best potion for make people young again. He sends servant to find the last key ingredient, seventeen  gold hairs from the head of a princess. Boody comes and captures Princess Goldie and takes her away to his cave to keep her until his potion is finished.

The servant, Peepo doesn’t like this plan because at the end of the month  the young beautiful princess will become old and haggard. So he runs off to give a small boy the message and then the boy passes it on to the local prince who begins to tunnel into Boody’s cave prison to rescue the princess.

It is a lovely little story about good triumphing over evil or greed and the bad guy getting his comeuppance.

The other stories, Pretty-Star the Pony, In Nursery-Rhyme Land, The Bold, Ban  Brownie, The Grumple Goblin, and The Noisy Boy are all nice little stories as well, each with their own narrative. Those of us who are more used to Blyton’s longer stories might find some of the plots lacking in depth, but these stories are meant for younger children. The stories are exactly the right length for one or two at bedtime.

My least favourite story is probably In Nursery-Rhyme Land  just because I felt it came from a much younger place. The style and the children felt much younger  to me. My favourite was probably The Grumple Goblin where a little poor elfin cobbler outwits Grumple the Goblin with a pair of shoes. I felt this was a most marvellous little story indeed,  and was quite ingenious.

I like this little book, it’s got some nice stories that are perfect for a cosy afternoon with a cup of tea or reading to your children, grandchildren, young nephews or nieces. It is hard to get hold of, the only copy online that I found was on eBay, and cost a lot. It is also part of the Pitkin Pleasure Series, which is made up of 14 other titles. I wonder if I shall manage to find any others in this series to add to my collection? Well if I do, I shall let you know!

 

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My third Noddy Book: Noddy and His Car

Serendipitously, my third Noddy book is actually the third book of the series; Noddy and His Car. (My first Noddy book was #2 and my second was #8.)


A BARGAIN BUY

As I mentioned in a recent Monday post, I found a paperback of Noddy and His Car in a charity shop in Inverness, Save the Children to be precise, for the princely sum of 25p. I don’t normally buy reprints but at that price I decided to. I think it’s a great bargain when you see it cost 35p when new!

It’s undated, and curiously isn’t listed in the cave of books. I’m not going to make a fool of myself and guess a date for it, I really have no idea when a book would have cost 35p.

Anyway, it’s got the same cover illustration as the hardback and also the full colour endpapers, and it’s fully illustrated inside with the original Beek drawings. As far as I can tell, then, it’s identical to the original hardback except for its format.


THE STORY

This story picks up not long after the last one finished, though you needn’t have read the previous one as the events are neatly summed up in a short conversation between Noddy and the milkman. He’s not had his little car long at all, and so we join him at the start of him becoming the little man with the red-and-yellow car, as the TV series song goes.

Unfortunately things don’t go very well for Noddy. His passengers have back luck, one loses a tail and another a hat and then the next her bag – and despite it not being Noddy’s fault they demand he pays them sixpence each. This shows the text hasn’t been updated at least as Mrs Tubby Bear explains to Noddy that two sixpences make a whole shilling.

Again it’s Big Ears to the rescue, as despite being a nice little toy, Noddy’s really not very bright. I wonder he’s able to live alone really!

In the end Noddy winds up with six sixpences (three whole shillings) after he finds and returns the items to their owners which is enough to be able to build a little garage for his car.


CAUTION: MORE GOLLIWOGS AND BED-SHARING!

I spotted a couple of potential controversies in the book, ones I’m sure someone somewhere will have complained about. Firstly, the first naughty toy to have misappropriated one of the lost items is a golliwog and it’s said of him what a BAD golliwog to find someone’s new hat and wear it. The other equally naughty toys are a mouse and a doll, so really I see nothing wrong there but to others it’s probably fodder for the Enid Blyton was a racist campaign.

And secondly, at the end Big Ears says I’ll spend the night with you. Ooh-er. That must be an inappropriate come-on and not an innocent sleepover.

[Much sarcasm and tongue-in-cheekness applies to the last two paragraphs.]


So yes, another nice little story about the little nodding man who I’m growing rather fond of. I will have to look out for more Noddy books when I’m out book shopping! I have seen a fair few hardback (90s-200os) reprints of late but I believe they’ve been chopped at by the editors and are therefore a waste of a few quid.

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The Marsh of Adventure by Poppy, chapter 16

Chapter sixteen:

Look out

The children soon settled down round the fire with the board game; Monopoly, and the great big tin of toffee. It had not yet been cut into pieces, except the pieces the children had already eaten, and it was one long, thick slab. Jack cut into it with a sharp knife and separated it into large pieces. The children had purposely lit the fire beside the girls’ tent that night, so then, as they were snuggled up in the bush, there would be a little bit of warmth coming from the fire.

The children had a cosy night round the fire. They didn’t stay up very long, for they were all tired after their walk up and down the hill. Everyone said goodnight to Dinah, who wrapped a rug around herself and crept cautiously into the bush. All but Dinah retired to bed. She had a bar of chocolate or two in her pocket and planned to nibble them so that they would last her the whole two hours.

She shivered slightly in the cold night, and pulled the rug around herself tighter. Kiki watched her for a while from her usual perch, and then, bored, put her head in her wing and fell asleep. Suddenly, there came a noise. Dinah stiffened. Then, a small hedgehog crawled by, hardly relieving Dinah, who let out the loudest scream you ever heard! The others rushed out their tents, immediately, expecting to see a party of large, burly men standing over the tents, but no, all they saw was a harmless little hedgehog scuttle under a bush, a little way ahead.

Everyone laughed, as they saw Dinah’s scared face peering out the bush. None of them had been asleep and had been slightly puzzled at Dinah’s early exclamation. They crept back into their tents and Dinah sat back in her place. Nothing much happened on Dinah’s watch, except a few bats flew by, making the girl jump tremendously.

A few owls hooted in the silence, and Dinah wondered if that could possibly be the enemies secret signal to each other, but shook her head and dismissed the idea when two large owls flew by. She very nearly fell asleep and hurriedly began nibbling her second bar of chocolate, to try and keep herself awake. She was relieved when ten o’clock came and she could gently wake Philip, whisper a few words to him and then crawl safely into the tent.

Philip crawled out his and into the watch place, where Dina had sat for the last two hours. He looked around the camp, which was clearly lit by the flare of the camp fire, throwing flames about wildly. Dormy the mouse was restless and crawled out of Philip’s sleeve, wondering where they were. Philip tickled him and gave him a tomato. His bad leg was healing nicely now, and soon Philip would let him go free. Dormy nibbled at the tomato softly, making a funny grating sound in the quietness of the night.

Philip watched and watched, but nothing came of it. There wasn’t a noise, nor a movement. It was Lucy-Ann’s turn next. The others lay asleep, snuggled up in the warmth of their sleeping bags. Poor Lucy-Ann shivered softly. She was very nervous about her watch, and hoped, unlike the others, that she would not see or hear a thing. But very soon, she did hear something. It sounded like the owls, at first, hooting comfortingly to their babies, but then, as it came closer, Lucy-Ann realised, it was not the nest of owls she imagined, it was a group of men, talking in low voices. Lucy-Ann’s little heart began to beat faster and faster, and at last, she crawled out of her place and shook the boys tent gently.

“Who’s there?” came Jack’s voice. Kiki came sailing out the tent and landed neatly on Lucy-Ann’s shoulder. “It’s me, Lucy-Ann” said the girl desperately, “Jack, the enemies are here, and I’m too scared,” she said, crawling into the boys’ tent.

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Bank Holiday Monday

Happy Easter to one and all for yesterday, and today is a bank holiday. Usual British weather seemingly dictates that it shall rain. Is it raining where you are?

This week we have more smashing blogs for you, Poppy’s next chapter of the Marsh of Adventure. Fiona isn’t sure what she’s doing this week but it might be a review of the Noddy paperback she bought recently.

I don’t know what I shall be blogging about. It might be the next chapter of The Missing Papers, as we’re getting so near the end.  If not, I hope it won’t disappoint.

To celebrate Easter, here is one of Blyton’s own Easter poems from the Enid Blyton Poetry Book.

A Happy Easter

A happy Easter, birds and bees,
A happy Easter, laughing trees,
Happy Easter, daffodils,
Whose golden cups the sunshine fills.
A happy Easter, lambkins white,
And little rabbits, skipping light,
A happy Easter, skylark gay,
And cuckoo speeding on your way,
A happy Easter, one and all,
Whether you are big or small,
Little snail or mighty tree,
A happy Eastertide from me!

And with that, I shall leave you with some of my random pictures!

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Making Blyton’s Food: Jammy buns

After one of Fiona’s marvelous re-blogs about jammy buns, I knew I had to have a go. I have the same book that Helen at Novelicious has, Cherry Cake and Ginger Beer by Jane Brocket, as you know so I decided to give it a bash!

Ingredients 

(To make 18 buns)

  • 15g or 1 dessert spoon dried yeast
  • 1 teaspoon of runny honey or caster sugar
  • 430 ml of milk
  • 680g of strong white flour
  • 15g sea salt
  • 110 g butter
  • Oil for greasing
  • Icing sugar, for  dusting
  • Strawberry or raspberry jam for filling
  • Whipped cream for filling (optional)

Method

  1. Measure the milk and honey or sugar into a saucepan and heat until the mixture is lukewarm.
  2. Add the sugar and yeast.
  3. Let the mix sit, and see if the yeast starts to froth or bubble: if this doesn’t occur, the yeast is not alive and you need to start again.
  4. Sift flower and salt into a mixing bowl, add butter and mix into breadcrumbs.
  5. Pour milk mixture over it and mix. It will be slightly sticky.
  6. Turn out onto a floured work surface and knead for 5 – 10 minutes. It’ll become smooth.
  7. Turn back into the bowl and cover the bowl in clingfilm. Place somewhere warm and leave for one hour. It should double in size.
  8. Knock the dough back to deflate and pull pieces, it should make about eighteen.
  9. Roll into balls and place on a greased baking sheet, well apart from each other.
  10. Cover again with clingfilm (only loosely) and allow to rise again for about 15 minutes.
  11. Pre-heat oven to 200 degrees or 180 fan.
  12. Scatter some flour over the buns then place in oven for 10-15 minutes.
  13. Allow to cool slightly then serve with lashings of your preferred choice of jam, and a dollop of smashing whipped cream if you want.
  14. Enjoy!

So after all that, what else could I do but share them around? First of all, my parents tasted them and gave them the thumbs up. When I shared them at work, they were gobbled up happily, though it was remarked they were more like sweet bread rolls rather than cakes. However these buns are a tasty treat for a nice afternoon tea.

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First Term at Malory Towers – How has Blyton’s original text fared in a modern edition? part 2

So, continuing with comparing an early edition (1948) to a more recent paperback (2000). You can see my comments on the first two chapters here.


CHAPTER THREE: FIRST NIGHT AND MORNING

The first change in chapter three is that the girls’ eiderdowns become quilts, possibly a more modern term, but eiderdown is probably not so antiquated that it can’t be used now.

Alicia’s threat of spanking Gwendoline becomes shall I throw away her brush? And shortly after that it’s said she had no intention of doing any such thing, instead of the original line of spanking Gwendoline. Perhaps they thought repeating throw(ing) away her brush was unnecessary? In both versions Gwendoline squeals and practically leaps into bed, a slight over-reaction if Alicia’s just threatening to bin a hairbrush really.

Talking of leaping, Darrell originally leapt into bed, now it reads that she leaped into bed. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with leapt, in fact if I’m talking I would say leapt (lep-t) not leaped (lee-pd). Nightie also becomes nighty again.

One change I like is they’ve made her brown orange belt into her brown-orange belt. With a hyphen it implies a browny/orangy, somewhere-in-between colour. Without it sounds like a contradiction.

I also prefer the word prayers without a capital p. For some reason Blyton has the girls do things like attend Prayers in the mornings, (not actual wording), which to me is unnecessary capitalisation. She also capitalises a lot of nicknames given to the girls like Old Thing etc, something I’m not sure about really, but those are also capitalised in the paperback anyway.

The last changes are minor, and in-keeping with previous chapters, some full stops are removed after abbreviations such as san (sanitorium) and exams (examinations.)


CHAPTER FOUR: MISS POTTS’ FORM

One thing I would have almost liked to be changed is the S at the end of Potts’s. Potts’ would be so much neater! Anyway.

Very little is altered here. Mam’zelle Dupont wears pince-nez glasses, and the wording isn’t changed, though in the paperback it is italicized for some reason.

A couple of phrases are de-hyphenated, easy-going and hymn-book, and the capital from prayers continues to be removed, and the full stop after exams also. (Though at the very start of the chapter Blyton doesn’t capitalise one instance of prayers anyway.)


CHAPTER FIVE: THE FIRST WEEK GOES BY

Blyton capitalises break (as in at Break the girls went outside – not actual wording), which I think is unnecessary and that’s missed out in the paperback. As is the full stop after maths (mathematics) which is in-keeping with the other chapters, along with lab and gym. Prayers also continues to lose its capital.

More hyphens are lost, in singing-lesson and boot-cupboard.

Queer (a word which seems to be used a lot less than in the Famous Five books so far) is altered to odd.

I should want to slap her becomes shake her, which is a little surprising to me. Shaking still suggested a level of violence, I thought it would become something like snap at her.

The other difference is that in the original, the characters’ internal thoughts are put in single quotation marks (the same as speech is). This is slightly confusing as sometimes you read something and are surprised a character would say such a thing, then you read thought Darrell at the end and it makes sense. In the paperback, thoughts have no speech marks at all, making them a part of the narrative which is potentially worse in my opinion.


That’s all the textual changes, adding eighteen to the thirteen already noted. I’m going to try hard to only count the first time a change is made – ie if nighty becomes nightie every time I won’t count it with each change, though I may make comment on whether an alteration like that is consistent though the book.

I know this series is meant to the about the text but I can’t help but pass comment on the other big change – the illustrations.

Often paperback titles have less illustrations than their original hardbacks did, but so far this isn’t really the case. There is only one illustration in the first five chapters in both of these copies, though unusually they are of different scenes (when comparing, say Betty Maxey and Eileen Soper [Famous Five) or Rene Cloke and Sylvia I Venus (Amelia Jane), often it is the same scene illustrated.

Anyway. Stanley Lloyd drew the scene in Miss Grayling’s study, when she gives her little speech. Jenny Chapple instead illustrated Darrell and Sally by the tree outside as Darrell is trying to make conversation.

I like both just fine, they’re both good illustrations. I probably prefer Chapple’s though as I had mostly hers growing up. She doesn’t attempt to modernise the illustrations, the uniforms and hair are still in-keeping with the time they come from. Lloyd’s are perhaps a little more period-looking with their details but I think Chapple captures Sally’s closed face brilliantly.

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Making Blyton’s Food: Homemade Toffee from The O’Sullivan Twins of Enid Blyton’s St. Clare’s by Helen at Novelicious

I’ve found another smashing recipe on the Novelicious blog

There is something very special about making a food from one of your childhood favourite books. When I made jammy buns from Malory Towers, I was incredibly excited as finally, something I’d read about and wondered about for years (just what were jammy buns exactly?), was coming to life. And I could taste it! The very treat enjoyed by Darrell, Sally and Alicia – the characters I’d grown up with – during one of their many match teas. Oh, it was such a great day.

Perhaps it is little surprise, therefore, that I’ve found another childhood favourite this week. Another Enid Blyton story with yet another boarding school (they did tend to eat delicious food at boarding school, no wonder we all wanted to go ourselves).

Photo credit: jazzijava / Foter / CC BY-NC-ND

Photo credit: jazzijava / Foter / CC BY-NC-ND

So head on over to Novelicious using the link above and read the rest of it, and maybe have a go at making your own toffee?

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Monday

So it’s back to the real world for me today, the April holidays are officially over.

Unsurprisingly, I did some book buying while I was away! Only one Blyton though, a paperback Noddy which cost me all of 25p. I did get some other children’s books though, mostly vintage, to add to my growing collection.

The School at the Chalet – Elinor M. Brent-Dyer, The Mystery of the Midnight Ghost – Helen Moss, A Mystery for Ninepence – Phyllis Gegan, The School on the Moor – Angela Brazil and Noddy and his Car – Enid Blyton.

I’ve never read any Brent-Dyers or Angela Brazils but those names pop up a fair bit amongst Enid Blyton fans so I thought I’d give them a go when I spotted these books for £7 each.

I couldn’t resist A Mystery for Ninepence as the dustjacket looked so good, I’ve got a few more titles from the Collins Seagull Library (which did a fair few Blytons too) and this one was only £3.

The Mystery of the Midnight Ghost is the third book in the Adventure Island series, I have the second title too but I’m lacking the first which Stef reviewed for the blog a while back.

And of course, then there’s Noddy who I couldn’t resist despite not normally buying paperback reprints. For 25p though, it was just too much of  a bargain to leave behind.

I also saw this brilliant selection of Blyton’s in Fort William, though I didn’t buy any as they’re mostly reprints and I have most of them anyway.

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Anyway, I’ve rambled on too long already I think, so on to what’s coming up on the blog this week.

Wednesday I plan to find something good on the web to reblog for you, Friday I will be posting my next Malory Towers blog comparing an old and new edition and then on Sunday, Stef is hoping to finally get her jammy bun blog up (third time is the charm after all!)

And as usual, some photos. Quite a lot of photos really, as I took an awful lot while I was away!

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The Missing Papers: A St Andrews Adventure, chapter 18


Chapter 18

Sally let Julian walk her back to the entrance of her halls. She stood on the step in front of the door and looked at him. She smiled wanly.

“I would ask you up for a cup of tea or cocoa but Darrell’s probably hard at work and we would probably just disturb her,” she said carefully.

“It’s all right,” Julian said with a smile. “I should hate to interrupt Darrell while she’s working. I should probably go and do some prep anyway.”

He handed Sally her jacket back, and gave her hand a squeeze when she reached for it. Sally shrugged off Julian’s jacket and passed it back to him.

“Thank you for the loan, it really did keep me nice and toasty warm,” she said softly. She pulled her own coat back on and smiled at him again.

“As long as it kept you warm,” Julian said with a smile. He pulled his coat back on and leant forward to give her a kiss on the cheek.

“See you tomorrow, after lectures?” he asked her.

“Of course,” Sally said, resting a hand on his shoulder as she gave him a kiss on the cheek back. “How about we all meet in café about one?”

“Sounds like a good idea,” Julian said softly. He gave her shoulder a squeeze before heading back the way he had come. He raised his arm a little way down the street to wave back at Sally.

Sally waited until he was out of site before she moved away from the door to her halls and headed down the other pathway to the main town.

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My second Noddy book: Noddy Gets Into Trouble

My first Noddy book was the second in the series (Hurrah for Little Noddy), and my second Noddy book is Noddy Gets Into Trouble, the eighth book. That’s what I get for buying a random pair from eBay because they were cheap.

The dustjacket for Noddy Gets Into Trouble is in better condition than the one on Hurrah for Little Noddy, it’s all in one piece though it has a couple of tears and looks a bit more grey than green. It’s not a first edition, I’ve compared the inner flaps of he dustjacket to those in the cave, but it’s from the original series which is fine by me.

The dustjacket

The dustjacket

 

The cover reads All aboard for Toyland, in the trains steam trail, as opposed to Pictures by Beek. This is because Beek had passed away by 1953, the year before this title was published. Mary Brooks illustrated this one, so it will be interesting for me to compare the pictures.

Comparing the covers I can see a bit of a difference. Brooks’ are a touch more cartoony and have slightly heavier outlines but both illustrators are good. Brooks keeps all the characters instantly recognisable and the difference doesn’t look so extreme that you couldn’t believe it was the same illustrator whose style had evolved.


THE STORY

It starts with Noddy waking up certain he’s going to have a very good day. His egg doesn’t taste good at breakfast though, and his car has a flat tyre, then worst of all Mr Plod accuses him of stealing food from Miss Fluffy Cat who heard a jingling noise in the night.

His day turns into a very bad one then, as Miss Fluffy Cat has told everyone he is a thief and nobody will talk to him or ride in his car. That night there’s another theft and Noddy finds Mr Plod standing accusingly on his doorstep again.

Noddy starts feeling terribly sad and unloved, which is even worse when he goes to see Big-Ears and discovers he has gone off to look after his brother Little-Ears who is ill. He gets a bit selfish then, saying ‘bother Little-Ears! Why did he get ill just when I wanted Big-Ears?” but he’s so ostracised by this point you just have to feel sorry for him.

All’s not lost though, as Tessie Bear is visiting her aunt who happens to be out and she stumbled across Noddy in tears and turns out to be a very good friend to him indeed.

She has the marvellous idea of how to find out who the real thief is, and so they embark on some pretty good detective work, the story turning into a very junior Two Find-Outers sort of tale.

I shan’t give the ending away but Noddy does get his happy day at last after the mystery is neatly solved in a brave midnight adventure.


I think I enjoyed this more than the first book actually, maybe because the mystery element was more prominent. I found Noddy mostly likeable in the story and it was a good little story, I can imagine children liking it a lot.

The book itself

The book itself

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The Rosewood Mystery by Cathy, chapter 6

A LOVELY DAY – AND SOMETHING STRANGE

The next few days at Rosewood were lovely. The four children lazed about, swam in the river every day, and went for nice long walks along the water. They also explored the forest behind the river. The trees were laden with rich glossy green leaves which cast a beautiful dim green light over the earthy paths that meandered between the old gnarled trunks. It was lovely and cool and quiet in the forest after the blazing heat of the July sun, and the children had a few picnics under the green canopy.

Miss Pepper accompanied them on a couple of their riverside walks, and she agreed that it was indeed a beautiful place. She even took her shoes off and paddled in the shallow water while the children swam.

“Miss Pepper’s good fun isn’t she?” grinned Snubby, watching her swish her feet in the water.

The lady that Miss Pepper knew who kept the horses was more than happy for the children to take them out riding. The children were all good at horse riding and took the horses out several times, sometimes round the lanes, sometimes along the river, where they stopped for lunch, and the horses waded into the river to drink and splash their feet.

Mr King was as good as his word and turned up outside the cottage a few days later. It was another glorious day and the children were sat on the lawn, having not long finished breakfast. Barney was doing a bit of weeding for Miss Pepper in a nearby flowerbed, Snubby was brushing Loony, who kept reaching round to try and grab the brush, and Diana and Roger were leaning back on their elbows on the grass, relaxing. Diana saw Mr King at the gate and shouted to him.

“Mr King! Hallo! Come on in!”

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Monday Rainday

It looks like there’s a lot of rain in the UK today, which is a little depressing as the weather has been getting steadily nicer since all that rain over Christmas.

Anyway I hope that this week’s blogs will cheer everyone up no end. This week’s contributor’s post will be from Cathy with her Rosewood Mystery on Wednesday. Fiona has told me, that despite her being on holiday this week, she will be treating us to another Noddy review.

I will be treating you to the jammy buns blog I promised you this week, but never managed to write.

So I hope that will whet your appetites for this week and I hope you enjoy my pictures  from my visit to Brentwood a few weeks ago.

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The Missing Papers: A St Andrews Adventure, chapter 17

If you need to refresh your memory as to what has been going on in St Andrews, click here.

For those of you who don’t need a refresh, here is chapter seventeen.


Chapter 17

Julian sat on the beach, on the same rock that he and Sally had sat on a few weeks ago when they had all been exploring the rocks on the beach, the same rock that they had observed one of the strange exchanges between Thomas Ainsworth and Anthony Pilkington. He had just come out of an appointment with the university’s sister who had removed his shoulder strap. She had warned him not to do anything strenuous otherwise he would injure his shoulder even more. Julian had frowned at her for that. He frowned now as he realised that if he and his friends were right, that it was possible that Ainsworth had been trying to get information of the paper’s whereabouts from Pilkington. It was safe to say that the missing papers were playing heavily on Julian’s mind. He had never taken so long to solve a mystery before and the time it was taking him to track down the papers was worrying him. However that wasn’t all that was on his mind.

Julian hadn’t had much contact with women while he had been at school apart from his sister and his cousin, and they did seem a bit alien to him. Julian was learning however that some seemed more sensible than others; Darrell and Sally were two of the girls that Julian had met who seemed incredibly sensible.

There was just one problem however; Sally was beginning to mean more to him than he would have ever imagined. If Julian had mentioned these feelings to anyone, the word they would have used to describe his situation would have been smitten. He was completely smitten with this blonde woman who seemed to alternate between treating him as some silly school boy and then seemed quite interested in impressing him and asking his opinions. He found it thoroughly confusing.

Julian frowned at his thoughts, wishing that there was some way he could sort them out like his previous adventures; methodically, with a clear answer at the end that left him in no doubt what the right answer was, like everything falling into place like a jigsaw puzzle. Julian was beginning to realise that women, and indeed life, was not like that. He had no idea that the object of his thoughts was walking along the beach behind him and had spotted him.

Sally stood where she was for a moment, having a fight with herself in going over and joining Julian on the rock. She was confused enough as it was by her feelings for Julian and she had no idea whether to approach him now.  She was beginning to wish that she had put on her thicker jacket as the clouds sculled across the sky bringing with them a strong cold breeze from the sea.

After a moment of internal conflict Sally decided to join Julian on the rock, and started to walk over. She could feel her heart race and there were butterflies in her stomach. She scrambled over the seaweed covered rocks towards the tall rock that Julian was sitting on. She took a deep steadying breathe as she walked around so she was standing in front of him, before calling up to him, above the roar of the waves;

“Ahoy up there!”

Her smile was as natural as she could make it. She had to cup her hands around her mouth to make sure he heard her.

“Permission to come aboard, Skipper?” she added teasingly to Julian.

Julian jerked out of his thoughts at Sally’s shout and looked down at her on the sand between the huge boulders on the beach. He smiled brightly down at her.

“Of course you can come aboard!” he called back with a grin. “Do you need any help?” he added, making to get up to help her.

“No! I should be all right,” Sally called up to him, the wind whipping her hair over her face. “I’ll just make my way around! Be there in a moment!”

She moved out of Julian’s sight, around the back of the rock he was sitting on and scrambled up, using handy nooks in the stone as foot holes and handholds.

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First Term at Malory Towers – How has Blyton’s original text fared in a modern edition?

I thought my series on Five on a Treasure Island was quite a success, at least it generated a fair few comments and a bit of discussion so I was keen to do another comparison of original and modern editions. I thought we’d take a break from the Famous Five, and Stef has been kind enough to send me a copy of the first Malory Towers book, so that was the obvious choice!

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I will be comparing the third impression from 1948 (first published 1946), published by Methuen and illustrated by Stanley Lloyd with a 2000 paperback by Egmont.Oddly this exact edition doesn’t appear in the cave, there is a 2000 Mammoth edition with the same cover in a different colour and I know Mammoth and Egmont are somehow connected (one is the imprint of the other?) so I believe the illustrator should be the same, and that is Jenny Chapple.

It would have been much easier if the poor illustrator had been credited somewhere in the book of course. I’m quite fond of Jenny Chapple’s work as her illustrations appeared in the Dragon editions I had as a child – in fact, I may prefer them to Stanley Lloyd’s but I’m starting to ramble. Let’s get on!

Before I get into a chapter by chapter comparison of the text I wanted to point out the paperback lacks the lovely end paper illustrations of the school and the map which is a shame, though of course paperbacks don’t tend to have endpapers. Also missing is the illustration of the girls arriving at the school which appears before the title page.

One final alteration is the change from Roman numerals for each chapter to plain old numbers.


CHAPTER ONE: OFF TO BOARDING SCHOOL

I had been discussing various editions with Stef and she’d warned me this one, being fourteen years old already, might not have as many alterations as a more recent one. I was faintly worried, I admit. Then I noticed the very first line was altered and, well, let’s just say there’s enough for me to be getting on with.

Darrell Rivers looked at herself in the glass, is how the first line used to read. Now it reads that she looked at herself in the mirror. I look forward to reading Through the Mirror by Lewis Carroll next.

Originally she packs her nighty, this is changed to nightie. To be fair I spell it with an ie as well, but I don’t think there’s anything wrong with the y spelling, it’s certainly not going to bamboozle the reader (even if my spell checker doesn’t like it.)

In 1946 Darrell was given a ten shilling note which her mother warns her is to last the whole term as nobody is allowed more pocket money than that. In 2000 she gets a five pound note.

I was thirteen in 2000, while Darrell is twelve at the time she starts school. I got about £5 a week in pocket money then. £5 to last a term just seems silly. That’s about 50p a week, assuming there’s only ten weeks to the term. That’s roughly enough for one chocolate bar a week and not much else.

A shilling in modern money is worth about 50p, so on the surface that seems logical. Only, it’s not. Because ten shillings would have bought you a lot more in the forties and even in the fifties and sixties than five pounds would get you in the noughties.

According to MeasuringWorth.com, ten shillings in 1946 would be worth between £12.32 and £48.87 depending on which variables you are calculating it on. I think £20 would probably have been a more sensible amount to update it to.

Unsurprisingly the word gay has been removed and the girls’ gay voices become happy ones instead.

The last couple of changes in this chapter are pretty minor. Platform 7 is changed to platform seven, full stop after hols (denoting it is short for holidays) has been removed. The stop after Mrs remains though, something you don’t see so often now, but I noticed it is missing in at least one mention of Mrs Rivers’ name.


CHAPTER TWO: MALORY TOWERS

In chapter two motor coaches have been modernised to plain old coaches, presumably as there are no other sort of coaches these day the word motor becomes redundant.

The girls are no longer gay and chattery, they are just chattery (which isn’t even a word according to my spell checker.)

Something I’m sure is simply an error is the line except poor Darrell, regarding how everyone but her seems to know where to go when arriving at the school, becomes expect poor Darrell.

Some more full stops have been removed, after the gyms, and the labs in Alicia’s speech, and an apostrophe has been added to make five minutes time into five minutes’ time. I’ve already discussed this in the Famous Five series, my humble opinion being that I prefer it without the apostrophe but apparently I’m just wrong on that so I shan’t say any more!

And finally, Matron gets a fashion update. Instead of her hair being neatly tucked under a pretty cap, tied in a bow under her chin, her cap is now tied in a bow at the back. 

Surely the idea of a matron wearing a cap at all is quite out-dated and old fashioned, regardless of where she ties her bow?


So that’s the first two chapters, and round thirteen changes in all.

There are 22 chapters in the book, so I’m hoping to get through more than two chapters a post so I’m not doing this for the next twenty weeks! But by the time I introduced and went on about monetary changes I’ve not the space for a third chapter this time around.

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The Marsh of Adventure by Poppy, chapter 15

Chapter fifteen:

Deeper into the adventure

The children were soon on their way back to camp, the boys carrying two large baskets of food. They were extremely heavy and they began to wish they had asked an adult to come and help them carry them up.

“So, how about that, then?” Jack said once they were out of ear shot of the inn. “Ferton and Kennedy were the ones who got kidnapped, not the kidnappers… When they went past I was sure I saw Mr Ferton’s face, and I assumed that he was the kidnapper, not being kidnapped himself!”

“So, if he’s not the enemy, who is?” asked Lucy-Ann feeling a tremble of fear. “And why did they want us away from Lowfell Hill if they are not the enemies?”

“I don’t know,” said Philip, thoughtfully, “but we’re jolly well going to find out.”

“This is getting stranger and stranger,” Dinah said, “we’re in the middle of another adventure, again, aren’t we?” The others nodded and began talking things over and over.

The children were soon walking steadily up the hill, stopping continually for the boys to have a rest. It got to tea time and the girls suggested having tea next time they rested. So the girls began preparing a meal of meat paste sandwiches, ripe plums, fruit cake and biscuits. “Lucy-Ann, you run over to the stream and fill this jug with water. I don’t know about everyone else, but I just couldn’t drink ginger beer in this heat,” Dinah ordered.

Lucy-Ann did as she was told and ran over to the stream that had now swung round in the direction the children were walking. The others were sat under the trees in the shade. Lucy-Ann dipped her hand into the water as it rushed by and they pulled the jug through the water catching the beautiful crystal clear liquid. It soon filled the jug and she began to run back over to the others. On her way, her foot caught in a hole, in the ground and she tripped over, the jug was tossed up in the air, emptying the contents, and thudded on the ground. Poor Lucy-Ann began to cry bitterly and the others ran over to her. “Poor old Lucy-Ann,” Jack comforted his little sister, examining her hands and knees. She had scraped them a little bit but there was no blood.

“Come and bathe your hands and knees in the stream, Lucy-Ann, and the boys will block up the hole you fell through. No doubt it’s an old un-used rabbit hole,” Dinah said, helping Lucy-Ann up. She led her to the stream where Dinah wet her handkerchief and dabbed Lucy-Ann’s sore hands and knees.

The boys began looking for the hole. They soon found it a little way from the stream, quite big. It was big enough for a small dog to fit down. It was already stuffed with bits of heather and bracken. The boys pulled it all out and peered down the hole. “Why, it looks like this is the beginning a small passage.” Jack exclaimed. “Though it hasn’t been used for a while, for lots of dirt had gathered round the edges making the hole smaller.”

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